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I liked the story till 200 chapters but it’s more personal of a reason for dropping it, I truly love Aot and I wouldn’t say bcz of spoilers but It just made me angry at Imu so I couldn’t if this guy is meant to be always winning I don’t care, It’s a good ff tho, so read it it’s fun but I love Aot more than one piece and can’t and don’t wana
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It's one of the best fan fictions I've read on this app. The only downside is its slow pacing, and the MC isn't mentioned very often.
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This is a very good Chinese One Piece fanfic, the plot is interesting and the flow of the story is nice. Although the translation has quite a lot of mistakes, it's still manageable and not to over the top to make it not understandable. Currently I've reached chapter 207 and I would definitely continue to read this once more chapters are released.
it is just awesome iIread the original because of this it's superb but it's getting evil , something's can be tolerated but this is getting too much evil
A novel with a very good premise , i saw other novels with similar ideas but they suffered from bad execution and problems generally plaguing Chinese novels. the progression is reasonable and characters are mostly acting as they should, the worlds introduced are good starting worlds for the novel premise. only 2 problems, the first one is that while the translation(or grammar if its an original work) are good but there is a constant switching between he/she pronouns which is a little annoying. the second one is that the updates are too slow which is a bummer. basically worth reading if you like the premise of consolidating your own anime world (OP) as a base to conquer other anime worlds.
The story is fantastic but their are frequent grammar mistakes here and their.
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When I first saw this story almost a year ago I refused to read it because I feel too many authors rush thru their stories' first setting or volumes to go to new planets or universes when writing an omniverse story. However, looking just at the number of chapter names that have been released over this time that are still related to the initial setting, I'm excited to jump into it and see what you've done with the place. I've only read one chapter and the names of the other chapters, so my rating is only based on that so far. I'll update it after I read it If I feel the need.
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would be more but author decided that after like chapter 85 mc is not part of the novel anymore, still worth reading until he disappears. -
This novel is slow paced, but very exciting!! Early on can be a bit slow because of world building/change. I almost dropped it around ch50. But soon as they start dealing with the new world, it picks up fast.
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I personally like the story but I feel like there needs to be more main character in the story there's too many Side characters I honestly don't care about them.
everything is good but where are the romance and harem moments. u clearly mentioned it on tag but there is still no romance why?
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this is one of the best fanfic I've ever read. don't be discourage because of the early chapters' translation, this novel has a smart and logical MC. He reformed the government and navy to do their job right, corrected the CD( celestial dragons) action/misdeeds, treated and recruited unjust/tragic characters, gave opportunities to the right people and tried to make a better place for the common people(taking over the world). I rarely gave a review,but this deserved a 5/5 rating despite the slight issue of TL here and there.
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Bueno, es una fic muy interesante y novedoso, un aire fresco en tema de transmisión de alma, me gusta mucho de como implementa varios departamentos, además que esté fic demuestra que ser el más fuerte no significa tener todo solucionado.
Boring novel, the only thing the protagonist does is hide. Kfkddkdidiididdiidududhdhdhdhdhshhshdhdhfyfudududududuudifidkfkflgkcfjejkelfkfrkjejejejejfjrur
Muy buen fanfic de one piece con un inicio muy diferente, pero por la forma en que estás desarrollando la historia historia y en al truco que tiene el mc es muy buena, por lo menos diferente a todas las demas
Well, most of the final bosses of anime, if they are male, will be muscular or have a big body. but i see in anime/manga, imu's body is very slim. or maybe because the depiction of Oda's character is often strange, so I don't know. but, this fic is riterally readable. thankyou mr/ms translator. keep update.
I liked the story till 200 chapters but it’s more personal of a reason for dropping it, I truly love Aot and I wouldn’t say bcz of spoilers but It just made me angry at Imu so I couldn’t if this guy is meant to be always winning I don’t care, It’s a good ff tho, so read it it’s fun but I love Aot more than one piece and can’t and don’t wana
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It's one of the best fan fictions I've read on this app. The only downside is its slow pacing, and the MC isn't mentioned very often.
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This is a very good Chinese One Piece fanfic, the plot is interesting and the flow of the story is nice. Although the translation has quite a lot of mistakes, it's still manageable and not to over the top to make it not understandable. Currently I've reached chapter 207 and I would definitely continue to read this once more chapters are released.
it is just awesome iIread the original because of this it's superb but it's getting evil , something's can be tolerated but this is getting too much evil
A novel with a very good premise , i saw other novels with similar ideas but they suffered from bad execution and problems generally plaguing Chinese novels. the progression is reasonable and characters are mostly acting as they should, the worlds introduced are good starting worlds for the novel premise. only 2 problems, the first one is that while the translation(or grammar if its an original work) are good but there is a constant switching between he/she pronouns which is a little annoying. the second one is that the updates are too slow which is a bummer. basically worth reading if you like the premise of consolidating your own anime world (OP) as a base to conquer other anime worlds.
The story is fantastic but their are frequent grammar mistakes here and their.
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When I first saw this story almost a year ago I refused to read it because I feel too many authors rush thru their stories' first setting or volumes to go to new planets or universes when writing an omniverse story. However, looking just at the number of chapter names that have been released over this time that are still related to the initial setting, I'm excited to jump into it and see what you've done with the place. I've only read one chapter and the names of the other chapters, so my rating is only based on that so far. I'll update it after I read it If I feel the need.
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This novel is slow paced, but very exciting!! Early on can be a bit slow because of world building/change. I almost dropped it around ch50. But soon as they start dealing with the new world, it picks up fast.
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I personally like the story but I feel like there needs to be more main character in the story there's too many Side characters I honestly don't care about them.
everything is good but where are the romance and harem moments. u clearly mentioned it on tag but there is still no romance why?
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this is one of the best fanfic I've ever read. don't be discourage because of the early chapters' translation, this novel has a smart and logical MC. He reformed the government and navy to do their job right, corrected the CD( celestial dragons) action/misdeeds, treated and recruited unjust/tragic characters, gave opportunities to the right people and tried to make a better place for the common people(taking over the world). I rarely gave a review,but this deserved a 5/5 rating despite the slight issue of TL here and there.
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Bueno, es una fic muy interesante y novedoso, un aire fresco en tema de transmisión de alma, me gusta mucho de como implementa varios departamentos, además que esté fic demuestra que ser el más fuerte no significa tener todo solucionado.
Boring novel, the only thing the protagonist does is hide. Kfkddkdidiididdiidududhdhdhdhdhshhshdhdhfyfudududududuudifidkfkflgkcfjejkelfkfrkjejejejejfjrur
Muy buen fanfic de one piece con un inicio muy diferente, pero por la forma en que estás desarrollando la historia historia y en al truco que tiene el mc es muy buena, por lo menos diferente a todas las demas
Well, most of the final bosses of anime, if they are male, will be muscular or have a big body. but i see in anime/manga, imu's body is very slim. or maybe because the depiction of Oda's character is often strange, so I don't know. but, this fic is riterally readable. thankyou mr/ms translator. keep update.