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章節 9: Orange Town.

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An- Well, I'm going to try to see if my writing is better when done slower, but It may be the same, I Guess that's up to you to decide.

Anyway enjoy the Chapter you Sexy bastards!

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{POV: Lox.}

Well here I am, chilling and getting directions from two clowns, how my life has improved, it brings a joyful tear to my eye.

"Oi, Zoro.", I address the Swordsman, he turns to me, "What?".

"What do you call a dog without legs?", I asked him grinning, He stares and shrugs, "I don't know. What do you call it?" He asked still slightly confused.

"Well you see, You can't call a dog without legs it will never come." I said with a straight expression, making everyone in the boat stare at me, suddenly I burst into joyful laughter, "Ashahaha! Get it? Get it? Because it can never come! It doesn't have legs!" I said rolling around in the boat.

One of the constricted Clown pirate chuckle a bit louder, but coughed to cover it up.

I stopped my jesting and sick back down, "How long till we get there?", I asked my head resting on my palm.

"A-About 5 minutes." He said gesturing will his head to a island in the distance.

"Cool." I said leaning back.

I guess I can think about something while I wait..

Who yeah! so when I was on the island before I met Luffy…

(Edit(AN) Imagine him blowing up a boar because he pushed them off a tree when he was fighting it, couple jokes blah blah blah I'm mad right now, I even made a Truck-kun joke! Sigh. Sorry next chapter I will make sure this shit doesn't happen again.)

{POV:Lox.}

Moral of the story don't fucking mess with my Beauty sleep.

As I finished recalling my hunt with Peppa's uncle the boat suddenly hit the docks.

"Where here." Said Zoro getting up.

We were finally at Orange Town..

Now on to finding our crazy captain..

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An-

Well, here you go!

The flashback section was going to be on the Training chapter, but as I said previously it got deleted, which fucking sucked, in all honesty.

Anyway I hope you enjoyed it, I've keep changing POV's hopefully that is executed pretty well. Next chapter will get into the fight with Buggy and his crew.

I've kind of thought about the relationships I'm going to do in this story, I always kind of had a General idea but I got 2 people in mind.. So leave a comment on what you want the 3rd to be. Now that I'm on the topic, I don't like large harems personally. Like dude my mans got 16 big Titty girls on his dick 24/7 and it takes up all the fucking time! I prefer 1 to 3 chicks in a relationship in my storys, obviously everyone likes to fantasise about being some big Chad and that's understandable, I personally can't connect that to Reality, and I'm already having trouble thinking about how I'm going to make a 4 way relationship work. Anyway here's the girls I'm choosing.

Robin, like previously stated. I simp for this woman heavily, haha.

Yamato, okay this isn't going to enter the picture until wanokuni so be patient.

The 3rd is your choice, make sure it's not Nami though I'm not a fan of her personality like I said previously, plus, Mc likes having his own money and Nami likes to keep all the ficking money the crew collectively gets and when they need some she scams them for interest when the entire crew contributed to getting that money/Berry. So in this story Mc is keeping his cash far away from the ginger crook, and his dick, anyway i'll stop ranting now have a good day I hope you enjoy the chapter.

Ciao!

(Holy shit it deleted again!!!!! I'm done with this shit… I evan made a cool fight, sorry I'll just edit out the mess up bits.)


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