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The premise is nice. The MC is smart and has a unique personality. Hope it continues.😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄
The story is interesting and I really liked the setting for battles and young Pokemon's training
It's a really cool fic, one of the best Pokemon I've ever seen, I like how the author moved away from the canon, the new rules of the world are interesting to watch, the characters feel alive, and I'm very upset that the fic died not even halfway through, and besides, it's my favorite pokemon appeared
Easily top 3 Pokemon fanfics I've ever read... And it's dead. Got announced as cancelled a few days after I started reading it too. It was real good, and as a rarity (for me) I was SUPER interested in the AU canon lore. (Normally I'm more interested in following series canon, which then goes off the rails as MC changes things. The new AU lore was SO GOOD however.) I gave all the review criteria 5 stars, except update stability (since it was just cancelled.)
i love the story it has a lot of potential. though it's been 18 days and I'm worried it's dropped
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I'm gonna be honest, from an objective standpoint, it's a great story with lots of potential. From my standpoint, I quit the story after he got his third pokemon around chapter 52/53. I just don't like his choices, especially since I'd never even consider fielding his second pokemon either. The story is great, but I dislike his team a lot.
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This is by far one of the best pokemon fan fics I have read to date and I have read a lot of them love the premise and the world and structure being built. The characters main and side are so fleshed out and feel real the relationships and rivals as well as the interactions between pokemon and trainers is done so well. If your looking for a good Pokemon story this by far is your best bet must read I promise you’ll be hooked!!
Enough man am not goona read another f..king zubat as a starter story bro i am fedup with the f..king generic starter of fanfics zubat…
This is a really good one. I just read through all 29 chapters in one go and didn't notice the time go by. If that doesn't indicate a good story then I don't know what does. Looking forward to more. 😁
It's a good Pokemon ff. It can use some improvements which I will explain in detail some other time after reading some more chapters of this fic.
A must read for Pokemon fans!!!! Read it, it has awesome battles👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃
I like the world the author is trying to build and his reasons as to why Pokemon trainers are encouraged, considering the upkeep. The Pokemons are pretty rarely used in any other fics. The strategies in the battle are awesome. An Excellent Read!!
Great pokemon fiction. basic premise but solid and entertaining story that I enjoy reading with no mistakes that I can notice or effects my read.
It is all 5 for now because i didnt read yeat i Will read because It is almost what i am look for an exploration in pokémon world i think i Will read those 18 chaos and forgot this existe for a few months to acumulate chaps i Hope autor wont drop It in the mean time
Author here!! Feel free to comment your opinion on the battle scenes. I am trying to create a fleshed-out MC, comment whether you think, I succeeded or not. Any ideas are always welcome. Cheers!!
The premise is nice. The MC is smart and has a unique personality. Hope it continues.😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄
The story is interesting and I really liked the setting for battles and young Pokemon's training
It's a really cool fic, one of the best Pokemon I've ever seen, I like how the author moved away from the canon, the new rules of the world are interesting to watch, the characters feel alive, and I'm very upset that the fic died not even halfway through, and besides, it's my favorite pokemon appeared
Easily top 3 Pokemon fanfics I've ever read... And it's dead. Got announced as cancelled a few days after I started reading it too. It was real good, and as a rarity (for me) I was SUPER interested in the AU canon lore. (Normally I'm more interested in following series canon, which then goes off the rails as MC changes things. The new AU lore was SO GOOD however.) I gave all the review criteria 5 stars, except update stability (since it was just cancelled.)
i love the story it has a lot of potential. though it's been 18 days and I'm worried it's dropped
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I'm gonna be honest, from an objective standpoint, it's a great story with lots of potential. From my standpoint, I quit the story after he got his third pokemon around chapter 52/53. I just don't like his choices, especially since I'd never even consider fielding his second pokemon either. The story is great, but I dislike his team a lot.
揭示劇透 This is by far one of the best pokemon fan fics I have read to date and I have read a lot of them love the premise and the world and structure being built. The characters main and side are so fleshed out and feel real the relationships and rivals as well as the interactions between pokemon and trainers is done so well. If your looking for a good Pokemon story this by far is your best bet must read I promise you’ll be hooked!!
Enough man am not goona read another f..king zubat as a starter story bro i am fedup with the f..king generic starter of fanfics zubat…
This is a really good one. I just read through all 29 chapters in one go and didn't notice the time go by. If that doesn't indicate a good story then I don't know what does. Looking forward to more. 😁
It's a good Pokemon ff. It can use some improvements which I will explain in detail some other time after reading some more chapters of this fic.
A must read for Pokemon fans!!!! Read it, it has awesome battles👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃
I like the world the author is trying to build and his reasons as to why Pokemon trainers are encouraged, considering the upkeep. The Pokemons are pretty rarely used in any other fics. The strategies in the battle are awesome. An Excellent Read!!
Great pokemon fiction. basic premise but solid and entertaining story that I enjoy reading with no mistakes that I can notice or effects my read.
It is all 5 for now because i didnt read yeat i Will read because It is almost what i am look for an exploration in pokémon world i think i Will read those 18 chaos and forgot this existe for a few months to acumulate chaps i Hope autor wont drop It in the mean time
Author here!! Feel free to comment your opinion on the battle scenes. I am trying to create a fleshed-out MC, comment whether you think, I succeeded or not. Any ideas are always welcome. Cheers!!