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the best advice I can give to new writers like you is to set yourself a specific goal, for example. 1 new episode per week one new episode for every 100 power stones (if the story hits a dead end or things don't go the way you want, make sure you time jump directly and finish the story, it will be appreciated more than an unfinished story
Hello, this is my first fanfiction, so any suggestions or comments would be appreciated. Thanks for reading.
good story !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
the best advice I can give to new writers like you is to set yourself a specific goal, for example. 1 new episode per week one new episode for every 100 power stones (if the story hits a dead end or things don't go the way you want, make sure you time jump directly and finish the story, it will be appreciated more than an unfinished story
Hello, this is my first fanfiction, so any suggestions or comments would be appreciated. Thanks for reading.
good story !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!