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- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
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寫檢討
Before giving my review my question is......that girls are in the harem (what happens here is that I am a fan of this series and dxd....which leads me to ask beforehand about it 😏😏😏) ps: 5* so that the waifu is roxanne❤️❤️❤️
Author, you have to be consistant in your characters. If you said that he watched the anime, there are simple points that must not fail. I watched it many years ago and remember it better than the MC that just finished watching it. Also, you have to make spaces between words, it is really hard to read.
Before giving my review my question is......that girls are in the harem (what happens here is that I am a fan of this series and dxd....which leads me to ask beforehand about it 😏😏😏) ps: 5* so that the waifu is roxanne❤️❤️❤️
Author, you have to be consistant in your characters. If you said that he watched the anime, there are simple points that must not fail. I watched it many years ago and remember it better than the MC that just finished watching it. Also, you have to make spaces between words, it is really hard to read.