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Nice book, u can do Alot better not enough suspense but I'll definitely recommend this book to my friends keep it up, don't mind me my first time reviewing a book
I don’t like Damien one bit such a domineering guy I feel Liam is the best partner for Elena now that she’s with Damien everything is gonna change well let’s keep reading
Good book, Liam is such a baby When thank goodness our baby Elena is back with Damien, please more chapters, and please make it longer hehe. Love your work
Liam is such a cool guy, though I was expecting Damien to be the one to save her turns out otherwise 😂😂by the way please we need more chapters
Nice story ☺️ Waiting for more, please make the chapters longer too Damien is just my kind of guy 😂😂 and I'm waiting for their marriage where tf did Liam come from
Their chemistry is palpable, but the plot's twists are somewhat predictable. Some resolutions seem rushed, leaving loose ends. The writing style is engaging. In summary, while the novel has its moments, it could benefit from more nuanced character exploration.
This story has compelling characters. But, it occasionally falls into predictable romance tropes. Elena's inner conflict is beautifully portrayed, but Damien's character could benefit from more depth.
IThe characters in this novel are beautifully complex and deeply relatable, making it easy to become emotionally invested, and the author's skill in creating a vivid and atmospheric setting, as well as in developing the internal conflicts of the characters, is truly commendable. I couldn't stop reading
Great work I hope the author continues without dropping it, the plot is quite interesting, I'll bookmark it to read later 😁😁😁😁👍👍👍👍👍👍👎👎
Nice book, u can do Alot better not enough suspense but I'll definitely recommend this book to my friends keep it up, don't mind me my first time reviewing a book
I don’t like Damien one bit such a domineering guy I feel Liam is the best partner for Elena now that she’s with Damien everything is gonna change well let’s keep reading
Good book, Liam is such a baby When thank goodness our baby Elena is back with Damien, please more chapters, and please make it longer hehe. Love your work
Liam is such a cool guy, though I was expecting Damien to be the one to save her turns out otherwise 😂😂by the way please we need more chapters
Nice story ☺️ Waiting for more, please make the chapters longer too Damien is just my kind of guy 😂😂 and I'm waiting for their marriage where tf did Liam come from
Their chemistry is palpable, but the plot's twists are somewhat predictable. Some resolutions seem rushed, leaving loose ends. The writing style is engaging. In summary, while the novel has its moments, it could benefit from more nuanced character exploration.
This story has compelling characters. But, it occasionally falls into predictable romance tropes. Elena's inner conflict is beautifully portrayed, but Damien's character could benefit from more depth.
IThe characters in this novel are beautifully complex and deeply relatable, making it easy to become emotionally invested, and the author's skill in creating a vivid and atmospheric setting, as well as in developing the internal conflicts of the characters, is truly commendable. I couldn't stop reading
Great work I hope the author continues without dropping it, the plot is quite interesting, I'll bookmark it to read later 😁😁😁😁👍👍👍👍👍👍👎👎