28評論
4.69
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
與他人分享您的想法
寫檢討
Gripping story. You do not need to know the lore of Harry Potter that much to appreciate this story. The suspence is that good.
Usually, I am a spectator and don’t rate/write comments about books, but this one was just too good to ignore if you are looking for an amazing book look no further because this is an absolute masterpiece and I highly recommend it 10 out of 10!!
Honestly one of the best things I have ever read. I’m sad it’s short but the impact of each chapter I have no regrets.
I have read the entire book and the only thing I can say is it a masterpiece and touching piece of literature normally harry potter fics go two routes one where abruptly ends or one where it keeps on going even though it's way past it's time but this is an exception to the normal way with it being to give without giving too much
It's extremely good, it truly us a exemple to follow in the art of fanfiction. The author managed to write his story using an innovating process : with a trial and flash-backs. The story IS well written and follow the original while subtly showing the differences coming from the existence of the main character. Thanks a lot for tour work !!!
Novela corta pero muy buena para leer.... Para cualquiera que la lea tienen asegurado un buen tiempo de relajación a otros fanfics de Harry Potter
............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
揭示劇透
Short but clearly one of the best fanfic that I have ever read. .......................................................''...........................................''''''''
The story is really good although it seems like a summary, it is extremely rare for MC to be Bellatrix's son, I have only found four of these fanfics including this one and this is the only complete one, all of them were good from what I remember.
really brings together a totally different ending to it all. short story but a must-read, and i am sure you will like it
The story is very good. It is written with flashbacks, explaining what is being discussed in the trial and it is a unique story and well worth the read
this is really good short book. it really draw me into the story. that the author had created.
In my time on WebNovel(2-3 years) I’ve never before felt the need to write a review, but this masterpiece definitely deserves one therefore I will give it the recognition it deserves by giving it 5 stars.
This was pretty good, I found the story well thought out and the main character a good addition to the background story of hogwarts, the only problems were some spelling mistakes but other than that I can’t wait for what else the author will write 👍
👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
............................................................................................................................................
Magníficos. ...............................................................................................................................................
The story is very good. It is written with flashbacks, explaining what is being discussed in the trial. I find this type of writing very engaging. The characters are not so well depicted. The background is not so well depicted as well. But this is something to be expected if you have read the other books from the author. The plot is very good, as it was in the other novels by the author. All in All, it is a very good fanfic, by the standards of the stories on webnovel, this is godlike.
[img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
[img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
A nice and simple short, yet entertaining story, the continuation and pacing of story combined with all the flashbacks was a sight to behold. But the thing I liked the most about this story was that author didn't leave any loose ends anywhere. Overall I will definitely recommend this fanfiction to anyone wanting to enjoy a short and good read on webnovel.
Gripping story. You do not need to know the lore of Harry Potter that much to appreciate this story. The suspence is that good.
Usually, I am a spectator and don’t rate/write comments about books, but this one was just too good to ignore if you are looking for an amazing book look no further because this is an absolute masterpiece and I highly recommend it 10 out of 10!!
Honestly one of the best things I have ever read. I’m sad it’s short but the impact of each chapter I have no regrets.
I have read the entire book and the only thing I can say is it a masterpiece and touching piece of literature normally harry potter fics go two routes one where abruptly ends or one where it keeps on going even though it's way past it's time but this is an exception to the normal way with it being to give without giving too much
It's extremely good, it truly us a exemple to follow in the art of fanfiction. The author managed to write his story using an innovating process : with a trial and flash-backs. The story IS well written and follow the original while subtly showing the differences coming from the existence of the main character. Thanks a lot for tour work !!!
Novela corta pero muy buena para leer.... Para cualquiera que la lea tienen asegurado un buen tiempo de relajación a otros fanfics de Harry Potter
............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
揭示劇透 Short but clearly one of the best fanfic that I have ever read. .......................................................''...........................................''''''''
The story is really good although it seems like a summary, it is extremely rare for MC to be Bellatrix's son, I have only found four of these fanfics including this one and this is the only complete one, all of them were good from what I remember.
really brings together a totally different ending to it all. short story but a must-read, and i am sure you will like it
The story is very good. It is written with flashbacks, explaining what is being discussed in the trial and it is a unique story and well worth the read
this is really good short book. it really draw me into the story. that the author had created.
In my time on WebNovel(2-3 years) I’ve never before felt the need to write a review, but this masterpiece definitely deserves one therefore I will give it the recognition it deserves by giving it 5 stars.
This was pretty good, I found the story well thought out and the main character a good addition to the background story of hogwarts, the only problems were some spelling mistakes but other than that I can’t wait for what else the author will write 👍
👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
............................................................................................................................................
Magníficos. ...............................................................................................................................................
The story is very good. It is written with flashbacks, explaining what is being discussed in the trial. I find this type of writing very engaging. The characters are not so well depicted. The background is not so well depicted as well. But this is something to be expected if you have read the other books from the author. The plot is very good, as it was in the other novels by the author. All in All, it is a very good fanfic, by the standards of the stories on webnovel, this is godlike.
[img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
[img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
A nice and simple short, yet entertaining story, the continuation and pacing of story combined with all the flashbacks was a sight to behold. But the thing I liked the most about this story was that author didn't leave any loose ends anywhere. Overall I will definitely recommend this fanfiction to anyone wanting to enjoy a short and good read on webnovel.