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The story starts off quite interesting, with nice dialogue that keeps you hooked inside of the book. It's too early to tell the overall development of the book, but I can say, it's a nice start.
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It has a nice start . I'm curious to see what will happen , the writer had a genius idea when started to write it .......I already like Theo and I'm curious to find out more about the story......
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The story starts off quite interesting, with nice dialogue that keeps you hooked inside of the book. It's too early to tell the overall development of the book, but I can say, it's a nice start.
It has a nice start . I'm curious to see what will happen , the writer had a genius idea when started to write it .......I already like Theo and I'm curious to find out more about the story......