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No gender swap tag. This is a warning for any one as excited for a skyrim fanfic as I was. ………………………………………. ………………………………………. ……………………………………….
Written amazingly, although rather gruesome. I have only read the first chapter. The only reason I am dropping it is because I have never understood why an author would create their own character just to gender swap them. Why not just make them that gender in the first place? Even more so if the character doesn't experience near immediate mental trauma when they realize it. It would be akin to being athletic and an athlete all your life only for old age to kick you while your down and make it impossible to move hitting you all at once. Not to mention the phantom pangs he the now she would be getting from the missing parts. eh. just a bit of complaint about not understanding. Still a great read if you either dont have a problem with gore or gender swapping of original characters.
You know, with that synopsis I expected a p*rn with plot kinda thing. But chapter 1 was just terror. Not sure if I will read chapter 2 as I have a weak stomach and was expecting something far diferent from what I got in chapter 1.
No gender swap tag. This is a warning for any one as excited for a skyrim fanfic as I was. ………………………………………. ………………………………………. ……………………………………….
Written amazingly, although rather gruesome. I have only read the first chapter. The only reason I am dropping it is because I have never understood why an author would create their own character just to gender swap them. Why not just make them that gender in the first place? Even more so if the character doesn't experience near immediate mental trauma when they realize it. It would be akin to being athletic and an athlete all your life only for old age to kick you while your down and make it impossible to move hitting you all at once. Not to mention the phantom pangs he the now she would be getting from the missing parts. eh. just a bit of complaint about not understanding. Still a great read if you either dont have a problem with gore or gender swapping of original characters.
You know, with that synopsis I expected a p*rn with plot kinda thing. But chapter 1 was just terror. Not sure if I will read chapter 2 as I have a weak stomach and was expecting something far diferent from what I got in chapter 1.
