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can't give it a real star score yet but if i look at your Percy Jackson story i know it will be good (sorry if that gives pressior) and you have captured my interest, i hope to see more of this. and this first chapter was good.
can't give it a real star score yet but if i look at your Percy Jackson story i know it will be good (sorry if that gives pressior) and you have captured my interest, i hope to see more of this. and this first chapter was good.