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Moi honnêtement j'aime beaucoup juste je pourrais reprocher que ça va un peu trop vite.Et est-ce que tu aurais une idée de quand tu vas poster à nouveau ?
great choice if your looking for a httyd fic, though i will only stop reading if it turns Yuri or Harem, it's just not my thing especially Yuri I don't swing that way
It's quite the story but not within my interest. Why? Cause hiccup was genderbent into hicca. I really don't like it when an already established character got tempered with.
Me agrada la idea y espero poder seguir leyendo tu historia por mucho tiempo más. En mi opinión talvez deberías mirar la serie animada y las peliculas para obtener más inspiración, agregar algo de piratas del caribe u otras historias sobre barcos, mar, dragones y búsqueda de tesoros, sería interesante leer sobre sus viajes entre islas y los nuevos dragones encontrados, sin olvidar la búsquedas de tesoros usando algunos mapas encontrados en los naufragios o islas, podrias agregarle mas interacción entre sus amigos y si te inspiras en la serie animada agrega más rivales piratas con los que luchar, sería molesto que terminara como los típicos héroes de DC o Spider-Man luchando siempre con la misma persona.
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Good story intresting idea. The quality is also very good. Not too many httyd fics out there. Only prolem i have is there isnt more, time between updates.
First off i would like to point out that english is not my native language so forgive me if i spell or write something wrong. Having said that, i have not seen any grammar or spelling mistake so far in the ff, the mc is kinda ok but ultimately very bland due to the fact that we know nothing about him other than him being a reincarnator. He was never really described and the only thing we know about his personality is what we can infer from his actions. Another thing that really bothers me (and really my main problem with this fanfic) is that it is just a recapitulation of the movie, nothing changes except for hiccups gender, the mc doesnt interact with anyone other than hiccup, nobody seems to ever talk about or to him and he just kind of tags along to whatever hiccup does, i would also like to point out that some interactions that he has with hiccup are straight out just things hiccup did with astrid in the movie (ex: the part where they ride together for the first time). Sorry for the long rant but i was kinda dissapointed that the first fanfic i found of httyd ended up being just a rewrite of the original.
Definitely rushed and no depth to the story as of ch 18, there is also almost no change to Canon. Idk the authors thoughts but maybe they are trying to speed the 1st movie along and get to after dragons are accepted to deviate from the plot. Basically the first 18chs have been a narration of the movie with the addition of the MC, I think it needs to slow down a lot. There is no depth in the characters at the moment. it just feels like as I said earlier, a narration. Definitely room for improvement, I am curious to how the plot will develop as this is my first HTTYD fic. Definitely room for improvement but it's added to my list5 Stars for goodluck
I didn’t get far. The mc’s name is alright, the story seems promising but the genderbent hiccup does it for me. It’s just a personal preference, I don’t like gender bending. I think what you could’ve done was make them faternal twins. Having hiccup have a sister instead. You should definitely put au in your synopsis.
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Great story but can you please just include the non-chapters in the new chapters? it keeps making me think there are more chapter than there are.
HTTYD is a cool world to be in it would be interesting if this also had Avatar. Anyways. Writing quality is good it's easy to read. World background is also good. Character Design is amazing, and dialog is great. as for story development, it's alright. overall a good read. keep up the good works
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Finally, a good Httyd reincarnation Fanfic. You're getting my five-star review cause I've been looking for a story like this for a while! Keep it up author
Keep up the amazing work, I haven’t found any stories on httyd and this one is great!
This is a really good story I’m a little sad at the slow update speed but that can’t be helped so all in all do recommend reading
Moi honnêtement j'aime beaucoup juste je pourrais reprocher que ça va un peu trop vite.Et est-ce que tu aurais une idée de quand tu vas poster à nouveau ?
great choice if your looking for a httyd fic, though i will only stop reading if it turns Yuri or Harem, it's just not my thing especially Yuri I don't swing that way
It's quite the story but not within my interest. Why? Cause hiccup was genderbent into hicca. I really don't like it when an already established character got tempered with.
Me agrada la idea y espero poder seguir leyendo tu historia por mucho tiempo más. En mi opinión talvez deberías mirar la serie animada y las peliculas para obtener más inspiración, agregar algo de piratas del caribe u otras historias sobre barcos, mar, dragones y búsqueda de tesoros, sería interesante leer sobre sus viajes entre islas y los nuevos dragones encontrados, sin olvidar la búsquedas de tesoros usando algunos mapas encontrados en los naufragios o islas, podrias agregarle mas interacción entre sus amigos y si te inspiras en la serie animada agrega más rivales piratas con los que luchar, sería molesto que terminara como los típicos héroes de DC o Spider-Man luchando siempre con la misma persona.
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Good story intresting idea. The quality is also very good. Not too many httyd fics out there. Only prolem i have is there isnt more, time between updates.
First off i would like to point out that english is not my native language so forgive me if i spell or write something wrong. Having said that, i have not seen any grammar or spelling mistake so far in the ff, the mc is kinda ok but ultimately very bland due to the fact that we know nothing about him other than him being a reincarnator. He was never really described and the only thing we know about his personality is what we can infer from his actions. Another thing that really bothers me (and really my main problem with this fanfic) is that it is just a recapitulation of the movie, nothing changes except for hiccups gender, the mc doesnt interact with anyone other than hiccup, nobody seems to ever talk about or to him and he just kind of tags along to whatever hiccup does, i would also like to point out that some interactions that he has with hiccup are straight out just things hiccup did with astrid in the movie (ex: the part where they ride together for the first time). Sorry for the long rant but i was kinda dissapointed that the first fanfic i found of httyd ended up being just a rewrite of the original.
Definitely rushed and no depth to the story as of ch 18, there is also almost no change to Canon. Idk the authors thoughts but maybe they are trying to speed the 1st movie along and get to after dragons are accepted to deviate from the plot. Basically the first 18chs have been a narration of the movie with the addition of the MC, I think it needs to slow down a lot. There is no depth in the characters at the moment. it just feels like as I said earlier, a narration. Definitely room for improvement, I am curious to how the plot will develop as this is my first HTTYD fic. Definitely room for improvement but it's added to my list5 Stars for goodluck
I didn’t get far. The mc’s name is alright, the story seems promising but the genderbent hiccup does it for me. It’s just a personal preference, I don’t like gender bending. I think what you could’ve done was make them faternal twins. Having hiccup have a sister instead. You should definitely put au in your synopsis.
揭示劇透 Great story but can you please just include the non-chapters in the new chapters? it keeps making me think there are more chapter than there are.
HTTYD is a cool world to be in it would be interesting if this also had Avatar. Anyways. Writing quality is good it's easy to read. World background is also good. Character Design is amazing, and dialog is great. as for story development, it's alright. overall a good read. keep up the good works
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Finally, a good Httyd reincarnation Fanfic. You're getting my five-star review cause I've been looking for a story like this for a while! Keep it up author
Keep up the amazing work, I haven’t found any stories on httyd and this one is great!
This is a really good story I’m a little sad at the slow update speed but that can’t be helped so all in all do recommend reading