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Has interesting as the book would have been, the English is just horrible, it's seriously given me headache 😕 😢
This, while an interesting concept, is just so so painful to read at times. Sometimes the cringe worthy writing can be pushed through for the sake of reading, it is a translation after all, but then there is the repeated inconsistencies with travel times. 2-3 days to get from Navel HQ to the East Blue 1-2 days for a bunch of disciples to arrive at Alabasta after finding out that their master is there… yeah, the time scaling needs to be rethought
揭示劇透
it's good, and something new to me, but it needs a lot of work as it is a translation.
Has interesting as the book would have been, the English is just horrible, it's seriously given me headache 😕 😢
This, while an interesting concept, is just so so painful to read at times. Sometimes the cringe worthy writing can be pushed through for the sake of reading, it is a translation after all, but then there is the repeated inconsistencies with travel times. 2-3 days to get from Navel HQ to the East Blue 1-2 days for a bunch of disciples to arrive at Alabasta after finding out that their master is there… yeah, the time scaling needs to be rethought
揭示劇透 
it's good, and something new to me, but it needs a lot of work as it is a translation.