摘要
Wonder Woman: Why do you claim to be Superman's brother?
Mitch replied: Well, it all started back when I was just a baby on the very first day of time travel. I somehow ended up in Superman's baby crib, gave him a little push out of it, and decided to make it my own. From that day forward, I became the "Son of Krypton."
Superman: If you have these powers, why didn't you save that plane?
Mitch replied: See, I can't just lift objects by standing on thin air. It's not that simple.
Batman: Why doesn't kryptonite affect you?
Mitch replied: At first, I wanted to fit in with the whole Kryptonian scene, but it just made me feel more like an outsider. Alright, no more pretending. I'll lay my cards on the table—I'm actually not a Kryptonian at all. I'm a true-blooded American.
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This is a tale of a man who adopts the identity of a Kryptonian but has ulterior motives, causing chaos in the world of superheroes.
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*-MTL Translation: https://www.69shuba.com/book/43658.htm -*
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oh wait thats it? Okay ig, i mean. The grammar isnt the best, you confuse characters with one another, make wrong paragraphs and misinform people of homelanders power, like he is some god when bro is propably weaker then like, movie superman even. Overall i think its like a meh out of 5 stars for me, especially cuz the world building just isnt there
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