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Mc with a door fruit which itself is a very bug-like ability. Parallel world ( it is not China-dominated it's a parallel world unified into one country) Zombie growth reasonable as possible(no godlike zombie appearing out of nowhere just for the sake of tension) MC just wants to be a happy otaku. for this, he needs little brothers so he can have more free time Harem = yes, otaku's dream, not much maybe 6 but not large no system but the door fruit is very OP already and convenient. [img=faceslap] if u like it showing some support will be very good
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Mc with a door fruit which itself is a very bug-like ability. Parallel world ( it is not China-dominated it's a parallel world unified into one country) Zombie growth reasonable as possible(no godlike zombie appearing out of nowhere just for the sake of tension) MC just wants to be a happy otaku. for this, he needs little brothers so he can have more free time Harem = yes, otaku's dream, not much maybe 6 but not large no system but the door fruit is very OP already and convenient. [img=faceslap] if u like it showing some support will be very good
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