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Added this and forgot about it. Huge mistake! Only a couple chapters in and I think I’m hooked. Can’t wait for more. Would recommend giving a read at least till chapter 6 ;)
Time manipulation is my favorite ability in general. Keep up the good work.............................................................................
the plot and powers seem interesting enough, gonna stockpile some chapters meanwhile
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Added this and forgot about it. Huge mistake! Only a couple chapters in and I think I’m hooked. Can’t wait for more. Would recommend giving a read at least till chapter 6 ;)
Time manipulation is my favorite ability in general. Keep up the good work.............................................................................
the plot and powers seem interesting enough, gonna stockpile some chapters meanwhile
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