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eeeeee! Love! love! love this book!❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ Can't wait for more chapters! Great job author 💓💓💓😁
I personally am not into the cultivation genre, but I think the chaos and fast-paced stories are really cool. They set up the mood very fast, and always keep you biting your nails to know what's going to happen next! Also, this story is a little (more like a lot) gory, which is something I enjoy reading!
Yay! The book transmigrates me into the world of fantasy and i can't just drop it after reading. I hope author updates faster. If you're looking for a compelling book, then this is the one for you!
As a newbie writer, I wish you could take the time to proofread your work and be meticulous about the grammar and arrangement of the scenes, especially the characters' conversations. The flow of the scenes should be interconnected but not jumpy. It will help the readers understand the story if you could add more descriptions, a paragraph, or more before switching to a scene where different sets of characters speak. Good luck!
I'm so happy this book is really glad, I just love how it immediately switches from teen stuffs to danger and take over. There aren't much chapters yet do I can't really say much right now. Pleaseeeee keep up the good work! I love your book.
It is very engaging as the story unfolds the conflict is getting tangled up to little mcI will keep my eye on thisKeep up the great work
many many heart to this book! If you're looking for a real thriller and some plentiful laughs this is the book. I totally recommend this book! we need more chapters ❤️❤️💥
eeeeee! Love! love! love this book!❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ Can't wait for more chapters! Great job author 💓💓💓😁
I personally am not into the cultivation genre, but I think the chaos and fast-paced stories are really cool. They set up the mood very fast, and always keep you biting your nails to know what's going to happen next! Also, this story is a little (more like a lot) gory, which is something I enjoy reading!
Yay! The book transmigrates me into the world of fantasy and i can't just drop it after reading. I hope author updates faster. If you're looking for a compelling book, then this is the one for you!
As a newbie writer, I wish you could take the time to proofread your work and be meticulous about the grammar and arrangement of the scenes, especially the characters' conversations. The flow of the scenes should be interconnected but not jumpy. It will help the readers understand the story if you could add more descriptions, a paragraph, or more before switching to a scene where different sets of characters speak. Good luck!
I'm so happy this book is really glad, I just love how it immediately switches from teen stuffs to danger and take over. There aren't much chapters yet do I can't really say much right now. Pleaseeeee keep up the good work! I love your book.
It is very engaging as the story unfolds the conflict is getting tangled up to little mcI will keep my eye on thisKeep up the great work
many many heart to this book! If you're looking for a real thriller and some plentiful laughs this is the book. I totally recommend this book! we need more chapters ❤️❤️💥