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This is a really good entry, I love instead of the MC possessing Azula he instead acts as a guide for Azula while Azula herself develops as a character. This is probably your best piece, don’t give this one up.
I must say, I am very impressed with your execution regarding her character. The SI is quite the surprise. He is smart, likeable, and relatable in many aspects of life.You really took me by surprise.
I haven’t read it, but I am familiar with the author of the work. He writes well. What a wonderful person. The author asked to leave a comment. How can you refuse a good person? Respect to the translator too!
Haven't read this work, but I know the original author. He's such a fan of gender-swap and cringe.... But the translator asked me to write him a review... so I did. As far as I know, of all the works by this author (original work) this one causes the least amount of cringe, so not all is lost.
Hi all. This piece is wonderful. The plot grabs you from the very first chapter and doesn't let go until the very end. I recommend everyone to read this work.
Пишу по просьбе автора . Я слежу за тобой ........... В жизни — война. В смерти — покой. В жизни — позор. В смерти — искупление
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Great story and true to Azula's character.I wish there were more kind of these fanfics where the OC is just a voice in an characters mind and this is one is definitely well executed.Hope you don't give up on this fic
A very good novel and a quality translation.I went and read the original up to chapter 30 already and thoroughly enjoyed it.It's worth waiting for the translation as the Google translate has a few issues switching from Russian to English.
Good. Please more. [img=update] I wonder if they will develop some trust between each other. [img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update]
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This is a really good entry, I love instead of the MC possessing Azula he instead acts as a guide for Azula while Azula herself develops as a character. This is probably your best piece, don’t give this one up.
I must say, I am very impressed with your execution regarding her character. The SI is quite the surprise. He is smart, likeable, and relatable in many aspects of life.You really took me by surprise.
I haven’t read it, but I am familiar with the author of the work. He writes well. What a wonderful person. The author asked to leave a comment. How can you refuse a good person? Respect to the translator too!
Haven't read this work, but I know the original author. He's such a fan of gender-swap and cringe.... But the translator asked me to write him a review... so I did. As far as I know, of all the works by this author (original work) this one causes the least amount of cringe, so not all is lost.
Hi all. This piece is wonderful. The plot grabs you from the very first chapter and doesn't let go until the very end. I recommend everyone to read this work.
Пишу по просьбе автора . Я слежу за тобой ........... В жизни — война. В смерти — покой. В жизни — позор. В смерти — искупление
揭示劇透 Great story and true to Azula's character.I wish there were more kind of these fanfics where the OC is just a voice in an characters mind and this is one is definitely well executed.Hope you don't give up on this fic
A very good novel and a quality translation.I went and read the original up to chapter 30 already and thoroughly enjoyed it.It's worth waiting for the translation as the Google translate has a few issues switching from Russian to English.
Good. Please more. [img=update] I wonder if they will develop some trust between each other. [img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update]
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