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This is not funny, neither history nor logic, a piece has been transmitted for 20 years, they could not respect a little of the history that has already been formed.
I started reading this expecting it to be a One Piece fanfic, turns out it's communist/Marxist propaganda lol. don't know why the translator is collecting money when he didn't even make any effort to proofread it.
keep up the good work bro, this book is a high-quality experience for any reader, you have used many experiences from real life like Karl max class struggle, the art of war book strategies, etc it is really good to see that author has did research about various things and implemented it in his book, this really gives more depth to the character as they actually imitate someone in real life, it makes them more 3D character than an simple 2D being who just have single emotion expressing capability and unexplained motivations. Note: my view is based on what this story implies but I have to say one piece is a world that has themes of friendship and freedom with exciting fights and so much slice of life, but this novel is more like organization building, freedom (more mature take and based with real historical ideas implemented) and bit educational as many of things used in it are based on real history I think. so I can firmly say this novel is well written and is a bit historical and mature, but if you are expecting a regular one piece fanfiction with MC who wants harem, gets overpowered throw world government with his own strength or with team mates or wishfulfilment and war after war and just killing then this novel is not for you. this is my perspective and view so feel free to express any thoughts you have. and author/Translator keep up the good work bro it was a pleasant experience to read this novel.
never would I have thought that I would find a gold in mtl🤯. maybe the beginning is a bit meh... but trust me, it gets better. all in all, this would be a fine collection.
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surprisingly the best revaluatiory fic i read, kinda funny how the mc just copied the communism party ideals and it works, good story, waiting for update
This is the worst fic I've ever read, there's nothing to save it, the plot is ridiculous even by power fantasy standards, this doesn't fit at all.
the story is good and the idea about the revolution from the scratch by feeling the same difficulties as the masses felt them is very good and the story development is pretty good, as it has the different pov and thoughts to support the idea reflected in the story. Good fanfic to read.
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Качество написания отличное, стабильность обновлений отличная, развитие сюжета идеальное, дизайн персонажей потрясающий, История мира абсолютно превосходна
It's just great, the story is getting more interesting. the biggest disadvantage of fan fiction is the small amount of writing. The idea of a revolution with socialism is very interesting.The main thing is the slow growth of interest over the course of history.
Buena historia y buen desarrollo de personajes, es una lectura que atrae y atrapa al lector, tiene un buen desarrollo de la trama y con respecto a la comparación de los 2 mundos aunque es obvio que se centraron el el mundo paralelo aún capta la atención del lector de manera concisa y atractiva, por lo tanto le doy una calificación completa ya que por el momento no me ha decepcionado y creo que no decepcionará a otras personas
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I got to chapter 8 before i stopped reading since from what i can see its not edited at all well its better than a few other translations out there and worse than alot others. I don't get why the translators keep posting theese things without editing them . I mean if you're gonna go trough the trouble of translating some novel and wants money for it on patreon why not do it right and edit the story so the text has a better flow and makes more sence.
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what is the name of raw? I looked and couldn't find it Kskskskskskkssksksksskskskskskskskskskakksskskskskakakakakakakakkaskakkskaaksksksksksksksksksksksss
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This is not funny, neither history nor logic, a piece has been transmitted for 20 years, they could not respect a little of the history that has already been formed.
I started reading this expecting it to be a One Piece fanfic, turns out it's communist/Marxist propaganda lol. don't know why the translator is collecting money when he didn't even make any effort to proofread it.
keep up the good work bro, this book is a high-quality experience for any reader, you have used many experiences from real life like Karl max class struggle, the art of war book strategies, etc it is really good to see that author has did research about various things and implemented it in his book, this really gives more depth to the character as they actually imitate someone in real life, it makes them more 3D character than an simple 2D being who just have single emotion expressing capability and unexplained motivations. Note: my view is based on what this story implies but I have to say one piece is a world that has themes of friendship and freedom with exciting fights and so much slice of life, but this novel is more like organization building, freedom (more mature take and based with real historical ideas implemented) and bit educational as many of things used in it are based on real history I think. so I can firmly say this novel is well written and is a bit historical and mature, but if you are expecting a regular one piece fanfiction with MC who wants harem, gets overpowered throw world government with his own strength or with team mates or wishfulfilment and war after war and just killing then this novel is not for you. this is my perspective and view so feel free to express any thoughts you have. and author/Translator keep up the good work bro it was a pleasant experience to read this novel.
never would I have thought that I would find a gold in mtl🤯. maybe the beginning is a bit meh... but trust me, it gets better. all in all, this would be a fine collection.
[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
surprisingly the best revaluatiory fic i read, kinda funny how the mc just copied the communism party ideals and it works, good story, waiting for update
This is the worst fic I've ever read, there's nothing to save it, the plot is ridiculous even by power fantasy standards, this doesn't fit at all.
the story is good and the idea about the revolution from the scratch by feeling the same difficulties as the masses felt them is very good and the story development is pretty good, as it has the different pov and thoughts to support the idea reflected in the story. Good fanfic to read.
Awesome awesome 👍 😎 👍 😎 👍 😎 👍 😎 [img=coins][img=exp][img=faceslap][img=fp][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=fp][img=faceslap][img=exp][img=coins][img=faceslap][img=fp][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=fp][img=faceslap][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=fp][img=fp][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=faceslap][img=exp][img=coins][img=faceslap][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=fp][img=fp][img=exp][img=exp][img=coins][img=faceslap][img=fp][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update]
Качество написания отличное, стабильность обновлений отличная, развитие сюжета идеальное, дизайн персонажей потрясающий, История мира абсолютно превосходна
It's just great, the story is getting more interesting. the biggest disadvantage of fan fiction is the small amount of writing. The idea of a revolution with socialism is very interesting.The main thing is the slow growth of interest over the course of history.
Buena historia y buen desarrollo de personajes, es una lectura que atrae y atrapa al lector, tiene un buen desarrollo de la trama y con respecto a la comparación de los 2 mundos aunque es obvio que se centraron el el mundo paralelo aún capta la atención del lector de manera concisa y atractiva, por lo tanto le doy una calificación completa ya que por el momento no me ha decepcionado y creo que no decepcionará a otras personas
揭示劇透 I got to chapter 8 before i stopped reading since from what i can see its not edited at all well its better than a few other translations out there and worse than alot others. I don't get why the translators keep posting theese things without editing them . I mean if you're gonna go trough the trouble of translating some novel and wants money for it on patreon why not do it right and edit the story so the text has a better flow and makes more sence.
Good fanfic ajjddjwjshdjshsjxjsjabshduwuwyeyruewhahdbxbanannxnxnxbdhwjajsbbrbebsJaksjdndbjwiwiwduduhehwbsbzznsjsjddjwjsjdjdjdjdjsjwjsjjdjdjsjwjwj
what is the name of raw? I looked and couldn't find it Kskskskskskkssksksksskskskskskskskskskakksskskskskakakakakakakakkaskakkskaaksksksksksksksksksksksss
Keep it up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!