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If only the translation quality was better I think this might be worth a read, such a pity, I last 5 chapters before I just could not handle it anymore :(.
The writing is unbearably bad. I can handle a bit of mistranslations here and there but this is just bad
Me gusta mucho pokemon y mas si es harem pero no puedo entender la mayoria de los pokemons que tipo son y su nombre ni el de los personajes si puedes por favor arregalo😖😖😖😖😞😞😞😞😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏🤩😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏
Good fanfic. This is a good fanfic, because the main character doesn't immediately become strong. But slowly it becomes stronger. from a weak condition, then he met many heroines who made him even stronger. The main character is also different from the main character in general. Once he gained power he didn't show off, even when he wanted to use his power he wore a disguise. and the main character also doesn't really lust after women, but he has his own principles in choosing women
If only the translation quality was better I think this might be worth a read, such a pity, I last 5 chapters before I just could not handle it anymore :(.
The writing is unbearably bad. I can handle a bit of mistranslations here and there but this is just bad
Me gusta mucho pokemon y mas si es harem pero no puedo entender la mayoria de los pokemons que tipo son y su nombre ni el de los personajes si puedes por favor arregalo😖😖😖😖😞😞😞😞😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏🤩😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏
Good fanfic. This is a good fanfic, because the main character doesn't immediately become strong. But slowly it becomes stronger. from a weak condition, then he met many heroines who made him even stronger. The main character is also different from the main character in general. Once he gained power he didn't show off, even when he wanted to use his power he wore a disguise. and the main character also doesn't really lust after women, but he has his own principles in choosing women