4評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
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Going from the current chapters. 2 as of me writing this, the author got good grammar. the story still needs some more chapters to really Form a good overview on how it will progress. but at the moment i would say it is a good read
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Going from the current chapters. 2 as of me writing this, the author got good grammar. the story still needs some more chapters to really Form a good overview on how it will progress. but at the moment i would say it is a good read
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