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The story is good. Dear author, do you have any estimate on how many chapters will this have? And when will it be complete?
Good storyline, descriptive writing and I am waiting for the story update everyday..[img=recommend][img=recommend] [img=update][img=update] I really admired Carnillas' characters; intelligent, protective, and very patient with Joanna action & treatment towards him.. He has strong intuition.. Strong stance to keep arranged marriage with Joanna to be real.. 💕 💕 I hope Joanna will accept him sincerely..
A great book with a brilliant storyline. I keep feeling second-hand heartache for the male character. The description of conversations and the feelings of the characters is very well elaborated. You start having the same feelings as the characters. I can feel the female leads reluctance, pain and anxiety along with her slowly developing feelings for the male lead. But at the same time, I can feel the male leads anger, frustration, mischievousness, longing and heartache. Too good. All that I am disappointed about is the update speed. Dear author please be regular with the updates, so that I don't loose on such a brilliant book.
The story is good. Dear author, do you have any estimate on how many chapters will this have? And when will it be complete?
Good storyline, descriptive writing and I am waiting for the story update everyday..[img=recommend][img=recommend] [img=update][img=update] I really admired Carnillas' characters; intelligent, protective, and very patient with Joanna action & treatment towards him.. He has strong intuition.. Strong stance to keep arranged marriage with Joanna to be real.. 💕 💕 I hope Joanna will accept him sincerely..
A great book with a brilliant storyline. I keep feeling second-hand heartache for the male character. The description of conversations and the feelings of the characters is very well elaborated. You start having the same feelings as the characters. I can feel the female leads reluctance, pain and anxiety along with her slowly developing feelings for the male lead. But at the same time, I can feel the male leads anger, frustration, mischievousness, longing and heartache. Too good. All that I am disappointed about is the update speed. Dear author please be regular with the updates, so that I don't loose on such a brilliant book.