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I loved the story. Only a couple of things bothered me. 1. What happened to the doctor who followed the Daniel's family? Last we heard, he wanted to awaken then nothing. also what about the chef lady who worked for Old Master Daniel's who traveled to the base with them it said she joined her family, but wouldn't she remain working fir the family to help support her family and keep them safe? also, towards the end, it mentioned how everyone in the Williams family died but didn't actually say Mr Williams died. if they kept him alive till his wife was found dead, he would have had no family, so wouldn't they have done the surgery anyway? or contact Anna as the only other Williams on the base?
very good read. some grammar errors but nothing that deterred from the story. the ending was satisfying
This review is based on the free chapters. It's an environmental/disaster apocalypse story, centered around the MC Anna and her friends. The story was okay, but there were some parts that I felt were confusing or unreasonable. I didn't understand how the power was still on when the 1st floor was flooded. Cut off would be immediate, I'd assume. I thought the grammar would get better as the chapters continue on, but it didn't. This story didn't resonate with me.
The book is fine and entertaining but I can’t justify the $150 price tag for the quality and quantity of writing available. With that kind of money I could purchase the entire physical set of got, lotr and still have plenty spare money for a kindle unlimited subscription. Not worth it especially with the lack of polish I.e. Grammatical and spelling errors. TLDR: just read the free chapters to kill time on the toilet it’s not worth buying a ludicrously expensive draft.
Thoroughly enjoyed the ride of Anna and Dylan with the Kitty. 😍 LOVE it and definitely a page turner for the apocalypse story. Will definitely reread again. Kudos to author for the execution and keep up the good work 👍♥️
I really enjoyed all the chapters so far. the writing ist good and the Story and Charakter are nice 😊 one of the Storys I buy a membership to have money/coins that I can spent for, because it's so good and I needed to know how the story unfold further... dear author, pleased keep up the good work and write more, so I can ready more 🥰
Fun story. The characters are very likeable. The story progress is a little slow. There aren't many events. I think it is a good relaxing read.
well so far I don't like the FL. Maybe because she is from wealthy family, she is a bit naive, lack common sense about outside world or more accuratly ignorant most of common sense, she stubborn but in a way the pride of being a young wealthy lady like those pampered princess in ancient time. The author said she is a bit smart in school but in my opinion it just about memorized (well most people like this), rarely able to comprehend and apply it what they learn or improved from it, or being innovative. and about her lame excuse, well it still alright, And for other character at least bearable, especially ML he is observant and most of it used his knowledge and being innovative sometimes.
Wonderful read would like to see the story move a little faster but so far it is good no complaints ,just feel she can share with her frienx at least one about the space.
Hi Author good day to u.. wanna check if this is original story or a translation.. roughly how many chapters for this novel.. mind to spill some spoilers.. Will the FL Anna have a happy ending.. her other half will it be Dylan or surprisingly Mark.. really like this story and looking forward to it.. Hopefully there will be a reply.. tqvm.. gambateh.. ps.. voting is less than 70 chapters.
Very enjoyable; the male lead has a good personality and the main characters actions are very consistent. My only problem is that even after 175 chapters the fl still has not revealed to the ml her power, and her hiding it is getting kind of annoying now. They have known each other for so long it’s weird she doesn’t trust him hardly at all.
This is the author 😊 (giving self review for my own work O.o)This is a disaster apocalypse type of story at the beginning 🙂 I hope you will like the story~
at the end of the day this is a story about very wealthy people able to survive the apocalypse because they are very wealthy people. I got about 26 chapters in and there's not much personality development in all of the characters. currently the building is flooded up to the third floor or so and our main characters are going to install security doors so that no one can come to their apartment because screw those people right? there's been no discussion in the narrative about government shutdown or emergency measures being taken or anything like that. somehow they are flooded up to the third floor but electricity is still going. and there's no Mass organization about how to organize the people on the lower floors. it was all just stay in this haunted apartment lol screw you guys. there are a few grammar mistakes but they are very very minor so not super distracting at all. at the end of the day regardless of how wealthy these people are when people run out of food and water no security door is going to keep them out and it just doesn't make sense to me that none of this is being discussed yet when the flood levels have already risen that much. you can only ignore a group of hungry desperate people for so long before things erupt into chaos. but none of that is being discussed. instead it's just all giggles and playing around and installing security doors to keep the people who are too poor to buy an apartment higher up out. in spite of the fact that our female lead has enough supplies to last her 15 lifetimes during the apocalypse and her special little space. long story short this is okay for a fast read if you have nothing else to do but it's not very high quality work
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Liked how the story was developed . A tad weird how sometimes the character was referred to by their full name (including middle name), maybe a regional thing ? Enjoyed the character development , including the one’ s for the villains/side character. Would have liked it to have a bit more on little Dylan. Overall good reading
I loved the story. Only a couple of things bothered me. 1. What happened to the doctor who followed the Daniel's family? Last we heard, he wanted to awaken then nothing. also what about the chef lady who worked for Old Master Daniel's who traveled to the base with them it said she joined her family, but wouldn't she remain working fir the family to help support her family and keep them safe? also, towards the end, it mentioned how everyone in the Williams family died but didn't actually say Mr Williams died. if they kept him alive till his wife was found dead, he would have had no family, so wouldn't they have done the surgery anyway? or contact Anna as the only other Williams on the base?
very good read. some grammar errors but nothing that deterred from the story. the ending was satisfying
This review is based on the free chapters. It's an environmental/disaster apocalypse story, centered around the MC Anna and her friends. The story was okay, but there were some parts that I felt were confusing or unreasonable. I didn't understand how the power was still on when the 1st floor was flooded. Cut off would be immediate, I'd assume. I thought the grammar would get better as the chapters continue on, but it didn't. This story didn't resonate with me.
The book is fine and entertaining but I can’t justify the $150 price tag for the quality and quantity of writing available. With that kind of money I could purchase the entire physical set of got, lotr and still have plenty spare money for a kindle unlimited subscription. Not worth it especially with the lack of polish I.e. Grammatical and spelling errors. TLDR: just read the free chapters to kill time on the toilet it’s not worth buying a ludicrously expensive draft.
Thoroughly enjoyed the ride of Anna and Dylan with the Kitty. 😍 LOVE it and definitely a page turner for the apocalypse story. Will definitely reread again. Kudos to author for the execution and keep up the good work 👍♥️
I really enjoyed all the chapters so far. the writing ist good and the Story and Charakter are nice 😊 one of the Storys I buy a membership to have money/coins that I can spent for, because it's so good and I needed to know how the story unfold further... dear author, pleased keep up the good work and write more, so I can ready more 🥰
Fun story. The characters are very likeable. The story progress is a little slow. There aren't many events. I think it is a good relaxing read.
well so far I don't like the FL. Maybe because she is from wealthy family, she is a bit naive, lack common sense about outside world or more accuratly ignorant most of common sense, she stubborn but in a way the pride of being a young wealthy lady like those pampered princess in ancient time. The author said she is a bit smart in school but in my opinion it just about memorized (well most people like this), rarely able to comprehend and apply it what they learn or improved from it, or being innovative. and about her lame excuse, well it still alright, And for other character at least bearable, especially ML he is observant and most of it used his knowledge and being innovative sometimes.
Wonderful read would like to see the story move a little faster but so far it is good no complaints ,just feel she can share with her frienx at least one about the space.
Hi Author good day to u.. wanna check if this is original story or a translation.. roughly how many chapters for this novel.. mind to spill some spoilers.. Will the FL Anna have a happy ending.. her other half will it be Dylan or surprisingly Mark.. really like this story and looking forward to it.. Hopefully there will be a reply.. tqvm.. gambateh.. ps.. voting is less than 70 chapters.
Very enjoyable; the male lead has a good personality and the main characters actions are very consistent. My only problem is that even after 175 chapters the fl still has not revealed to the ml her power, and her hiding it is getting kind of annoying now. They have known each other for so long it’s weird she doesn’t trust him hardly at all.
This is the author 😊 (giving self review for my own work O.o)This is a disaster apocalypse type of story at the beginning 🙂 I hope you will like the story~
at the end of the day this is a story about very wealthy people able to survive the apocalypse because they are very wealthy people. I got about 26 chapters in and there's not much personality development in all of the characters. currently the building is flooded up to the third floor or so and our main characters are going to install security doors so that no one can come to their apartment because screw those people right? there's been no discussion in the narrative about government shutdown or emergency measures being taken or anything like that. somehow they are flooded up to the third floor but electricity is still going. and there's no Mass organization about how to organize the people on the lower floors. it was all just stay in this haunted apartment lol screw you guys. there are a few grammar mistakes but they are very very minor so not super distracting at all. at the end of the day regardless of how wealthy these people are when people run out of food and water no security door is going to keep them out and it just doesn't make sense to me that none of this is being discussed yet when the flood levels have already risen that much. you can only ignore a group of hungry desperate people for so long before things erupt into chaos. but none of that is being discussed. instead it's just all giggles and playing around and installing security doors to keep the people who are too poor to buy an apartment higher up out. in spite of the fact that our female lead has enough supplies to last her 15 lifetimes during the apocalypse and her special little space. long story short this is okay for a fast read if you have nothing else to do but it's not very high quality work
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Liked how the story was developed . A tad weird how sometimes the character was referred to by their full name (including middle name), maybe a regional thing ? Enjoyed the character development , including the one’ s for the villains/side character. Would have liked it to have a bit more on little Dylan. Overall good reading