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This book is really awesome. The pacing the style and the plot all has a great world built to make us understand what and where we are going through. The plot is too reckless as it ahs a unique setting that plays and entire different theme. Loved the book and would recommend all to read. GREAT WORK AUTHOR KEEP IT UP
I have read many isekai novels, but this is a truly unique novel and kinda new concept. I enjoyed reading this and the writing quality is also good, the flow is maintained well. The updating stability is also maintained well. Overall, it's an interesting novel and worthy of one's time. Keep up the good work author
This book is good! You can tell by the way this is written that the author is talented. It's not a copy-and-paste book either- and it's unique in it's own way! Love it, looking forward to more!
Its really interesting novel! Finn becomes a haunted house owner when he dies and wakes up. Cool and unique story with a good plot! Five stars from me!
They storyline is good. I like the way everything leads to another and it just create this seamless art piece. I do recommend you reading it🙃
As I said in my previous comment, of all things mc can reincarnate to, it was a haunted house! The main point of the story is refreshing, and it attracts readers, wondering how the story will unfold or how the author will execute the plot. So far it was smooth^^ writing is good too and I didn't see any typos! It's a good story, author! 🙌🙌
I was looking for something different and this one offered that.turning into a haunted house is something I have never seen before. It will be enjoyable for sure.
synopsis sent me chills. Good chills btw😂❤️. overall this is a well thought out story.
Well not too many chapters available yet, but so far it is a really good story. The characters are fleshed out well and the grammar is up to standard, even beyond average in some places which is the sign of a good writer. However, I just wish that the main plot other than just 'being reborn' was made available to the reader at least a lot earlier, like dramatic irony where only readers know and not mc if you want. Anyways, I also wish more characters were there and the world around mc was built up more, but then again I suppose that s something to ask of a novel with over 100 chapters XD
"Overall, I found this work to be engaging and promising. The writing quality is commendable, with good attention to grammar and consistent updates. The characters are well-described and intriguing, drawing readers into their world. However, I believe there is room for improvement in terms of pacing. Introducing key conflicts or elements a bit earlier might enhance the story's grip on the audience. Additionally, delving deeper into the world's background could provide a richer context for the narrative. Keep up the good work, and I look forward to seeing how the story evolves!"
First of all, I love the title lol. The mc's backstory is well thought out and the transition from his death to his new life as a haunted house is magnificent. The introduction of abilities after he reincarnated was not overwhelming and the story itself is very interesting. Personally, this book is right up my alley. I'm really excited about how the story will progress so I'll be waiting for every chapter release lol.
Oh my, What a brilliant idea and story! To me, its hilarious and I think I found a brand new of enjoyment as I read your book. Please keep up this magnificent story!
Oh God the title made me laugh so hard. Instant five stars because the content is perfect and the story is better than some of the isekai I had read. Please do not drop this!
I have read many Isekai stories before, there's even one who became a vending machine. But your story exceeds that in terms of exaggeration of what an MC can become as an Isekai character. I'm really excited about what kind of story this book is going to offer.
The plot is very unique, I'm really intrigued by how this is going to turn out. The grammar and writing is good and the update is very stable. Altogether the work has an amazing potential.
5 stars just because of the premise. I love reading things like this. Moreover, the grammar seems very good from what I've read, which is already a blessing given the atrocious grammar on this app
Interesting premise, I've never read something where the main character is a house, but it makes sense for the most part. I'll definitely give this a chance.
This book is really awesome. The pacing the style and the plot all has a great world built to make us understand what and where we are going through. The plot is too reckless as it ahs a unique setting that plays and entire different theme. Loved the book and would recommend all to read. GREAT WORK AUTHOR KEEP IT UP
I have read many isekai novels, but this is a truly unique novel and kinda new concept. I enjoyed reading this and the writing quality is also good, the flow is maintained well. The updating stability is also maintained well. Overall, it's an interesting novel and worthy of one's time. Keep up the good work author
This book is good! You can tell by the way this is written that the author is talented. It's not a copy-and-paste book either- and it's unique in it's own way! Love it, looking forward to more!
Its really interesting novel! Finn becomes a haunted house owner when he dies and wakes up. Cool and unique story with a good plot! Five stars from me!
They storyline is good. I like the way everything leads to another and it just create this seamless art piece. I do recommend you reading it🙃
As I said in my previous comment, of all things mc can reincarnate to, it was a haunted house! The main point of the story is refreshing, and it attracts readers, wondering how the story will unfold or how the author will execute the plot. So far it was smooth^^ writing is good too and I didn't see any typos! It's a good story, author! 🙌🙌
I was looking for something different and this one offered that.turning into a haunted house is something I have never seen before. It will be enjoyable for sure.
synopsis sent me chills. Good chills btw😂❤️. overall this is a well thought out story.
Well not too many chapters available yet, but so far it is a really good story. The characters are fleshed out well and the grammar is up to standard, even beyond average in some places which is the sign of a good writer. However, I just wish that the main plot other than just 'being reborn' was made available to the reader at least a lot earlier, like dramatic irony where only readers know and not mc if you want. Anyways, I also wish more characters were there and the world around mc was built up more, but then again I suppose that s something to ask of a novel with over 100 chapters XD
"Overall, I found this work to be engaging and promising. The writing quality is commendable, with good attention to grammar and consistent updates. The characters are well-described and intriguing, drawing readers into their world. However, I believe there is room for improvement in terms of pacing. Introducing key conflicts or elements a bit earlier might enhance the story's grip on the audience. Additionally, delving deeper into the world's background could provide a richer context for the narrative. Keep up the good work, and I look forward to seeing how the story evolves!"
First of all, I love the title lol. The mc's backstory is well thought out and the transition from his death to his new life as a haunted house is magnificent. The introduction of abilities after he reincarnated was not overwhelming and the story itself is very interesting. Personally, this book is right up my alley. I'm really excited about how the story will progress so I'll be waiting for every chapter release lol.
Oh my, What a brilliant idea and story! To me, its hilarious and I think I found a brand new of enjoyment as I read your book. Please keep up this magnificent story!
Oh God the title made me laugh so hard. Instant five stars because the content is perfect and the story is better than some of the isekai I had read. Please do not drop this!
I have read many Isekai stories before, there's even one who became a vending machine. But your story exceeds that in terms of exaggeration of what an MC can become as an Isekai character. I'm really excited about what kind of story this book is going to offer.
The plot is very unique, I'm really intrigued by how this is going to turn out. The grammar and writing is good and the update is very stable. Altogether the work has an amazing potential.
5 stars just because of the premise. I love reading things like this. Moreover, the grammar seems very good from what I've read, which is already a blessing given the atrocious grammar on this app
Interesting premise, I've never read something where the main character is a house, but it makes sense for the most part. I'll definitely give this a chance.