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- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
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寫檢討
The world of fallen angels and demons is an interesting one. The MC is weak but strong in resolve, that makes him sympathetic. The MC and his bully first get into a fight, then they duel. It's feels a bit repetitive. Maybe they should just duel from the start?Intriquing story so far. Keep up the good work!
It's good. The writing is decent, the main character's origin is shrouded in mystery and there are plenty of fallen angels. As for the story, it's too early to judge so I hope the author keeps writing it.
The world of fallen angels and demons is an interesting one. The MC is weak but strong in resolve, that makes him sympathetic. The MC and his bully first get into a fight, then they duel. It's feels a bit repetitive. Maybe they should just duel from the start?Intriquing story so far. Keep up the good work!
It's good. The writing is decent, the main character's origin is shrouded in mystery and there are plenty of fallen angels. As for the story, it's too early to judge so I hope the author keeps writing it.