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Although the grammar is pretty bad, there are some well-thought-out twists and turns. The MC is surprisingly resourceful and there's not much focus on the female characters. All in all, it's much better than 90% of the CNs out there, if you can stomach the poor translation.
tengo que decir al principio no me gustó mucho no se como que no atrapaba, pero después de leer varios capítulos no puedo dejar de leer gran historia, me gusta que dejes el canon y juegos con todos los personajes y no tengas miedo de matar a los que deben desaparecer, lo único que no me gustó fue la oc que metiste la francotirador no entiendo porque meterla habiendo tantos personajes para elegir , porque ni es graciosa o algo, no aporta algo relevante a la historia
The fanfiction is very cool and interesting, I hope in the future the author will not abandon it and will be able to finish it. I'm looking forward to new chapters (I'm writing this through a translator, so I hope my thoughts are clear (*´ω｀*) )
"<...> Kill Roger at the beginning" - this is a misleading title. Roger doesn't die at the beginning and he isn't the first kill. In fact Roger is still alive in the recent chapter. Don't get me wrong, this is a good fic, but I thought about a different fanfic while reading the title and I only tried to read it today.
I read a few chapters, and i was a bit confused at first but now I'm going with the pace. Good book keep it up. 👍
Good novel,Good novel,Good novel,Good novel,Good novel,Good novel. Keep it up, Keep it up, Keep it up, Keep it up, Keep it up, Keep it up, Keep it up, Keep it up,
I really liked your content The new generation fan fictional comic really fantasies me Please don't stop posting it Looking forward to see your next content.
Nice story author keep it up buddy. Really liked your content . Please don't stop posting it I am Waiting for more chapters. Your story idea really fantasies me
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I must say interesting story and the translating quality is much better then before. Stability of the Update 1 chapter pro day is great. I can only say read the story^^
It's a great concept with the same villainous undertones like John Kyenes but better. I especially like the on hook system in this novel. Let's start another wonderful novel.
Go for it author San. If it's anything like your last book then you got a fan. And judging by the first chap, it is indeed worth my time. Moreover, the translation this time is really good.
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Hey guys, back with another one piece fan fiction. And believe me, I guarantee the translation quality and the same adventurous plot.
For a translation, it doesn't really get better than this story-wise. Mc is very cunning and ruthless he just plays most of his enemies like a fiddle, a very entertaining read.
Although the grammar is pretty bad, there are some well-thought-out twists and turns. The MC is surprisingly resourceful and there's not much focus on the female characters. All in all, it's much better than 90% of the CNs out there, if you can stomach the poor translation.
tengo que decir al principio no me gustó mucho no se como que no atrapaba, pero después de leer varios capítulos no puedo dejar de leer gran historia, me gusta que dejes el canon y juegos con todos los personajes y no tengas miedo de matar a los que deben desaparecer, lo único que no me gustó fue la oc que metiste la francotirador no entiendo porque meterla habiendo tantos personajes para elegir , porque ni es graciosa o algo, no aporta algo relevante a la historia
The fanfiction is very cool and interesting, I hope in the future the author will not abandon it and will be able to finish it. I'm looking forward to new chapters (I'm writing this through a translator, so I hope my thoughts are clear (*´ω｀*) )
"<...> Kill Roger at the beginning" - this is a misleading title. Roger doesn't die at the beginning and he isn't the first kill. In fact Roger is still alive in the recent chapter. Don't get me wrong, this is a good fic, but I thought about a different fanfic while reading the title and I only tried to read it today.
I read a few chapters, and i was a bit confused at first but now I'm going with the pace. Good book keep it up. 👍
Good novel,Good novel,Good novel,Good novel,Good novel,Good novel. Keep it up, Keep it up, Keep it up, Keep it up, Keep it up, Keep it up, Keep it up, Keep it up,
I really liked your content The new generation fan fictional comic really fantasies me Please don't stop posting it Looking forward to see your next content.
Nice story author keep it up buddy. Really liked your content . Please don't stop posting it I am Waiting for more chapters. Your story idea really fantasies me
Awesome AwesomeAwesomeAwesomeAwesomeAwesomeAwesomeAwesomeAwesomeAwesomeAwesomeAwesomeAwesomeAwesomeAwesomeAwesomeAwesomeAwesomeAwesomeAwesomeAwesomeAwesomeAwesomeAwesomeAwesomeAwesomeAwesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! [img=рекомендую][img=обновить]
I must say interesting story and the translating quality is much better then before. Stability of the Update 1 chapter pro day is great. I can only say read the story^^
It's a great concept with the same villainous undertones like John Kyenes but better. I especially like the on hook system in this novel. Let's start another wonderful novel.
Go for it author San. If it's anything like your last book then you got a fan. And judging by the first chap, it is indeed worth my time. Moreover, the translation this time is really good.
[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Hey guys, back with another one piece fan fiction. And believe me, I guarantee the translation quality and the same adventurous plot.
For a translation, it doesn't really get better than this story-wise. Mc is very cunning and ruthless he just plays most of his enemies like a fiddle, a very entertaining read.