5評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
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A proper start and build-up. Writing is as good as always just like your other fiction. ************************************************************
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5 Stark for the author. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
A proper start and build-up. Writing is as good as always just like your other fiction. ************************************************************