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It's quite a meh novel. The slight A.U. aside. The gacha and the character personalities are the main issues I have against this. Most of the time the card draws that he gets are trash and just for comedic relief... particularly women's clothing. Unless when it isn't, making you roll your eyes for the blatant asspull that the author just did. And the character personalities and dialogues could really do some work. All the character dialogues and speeches are quite bland, there's barely any difference. It isn't that bad perse... it's just really lacking with variety, and it really sticks out with the numbers of characters in this novel
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Thx! <3 Pls dont drop. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
на сколько бы хорошим не было произведение, то насколько главный герой симп для всех девушек полностью убивает впечатление. Хотя в середине автор непонятно с чего говорит как будто он опытный человек, но по поведению это 13 летний стеснительный школьник
Me gusta mucho la historia y espero que no la dejes gracias por tu tiempo invertido en escribir ❤️❤️ .,..........,.................................................................................solo eso XD
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I believe that this story deserves a higher rating, so here’s my 5 stars. Please keep it going.
the story is probably good but i really hate it when the translator don't change Chinese mc name to Japanese name.
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Great need more chapters it's lacking in chapter's! And needs more words lots of words! Add more updates it needs more updates! We need more awesome author's like you please ask your mom and dad they need to work harder!
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Thanks to the author for starting to translate this fanfic, an extremely good piece of work in recent times. Thanks also for the link to the original, thanks to which the novel was read faster. Let's get to the positives: * there is no super power from the very beginning, * there is no Pokemon like a harem, * slow and harmonious relationships with the heroines, but in my opinion a hasty ending, where there is normal development and only Android No. 18 and Sykes got the end, and Soifon and Torumi were simply left off-screen in the epilogue. * in the end they tried, I don’t know, to cut off the power of ms? Otherwise, I don’t know, perhaps the limitations of the World. V in the end he doesn't have the superpower to destroy universes
a lot of typo especially on people titles as expected from mtl, mc progress in power is slow and that mainly because of how cheap his system, I mean a lot of times when he gacha he get woman clothes or trash item, it's like he only get a good item when the plot needed it.
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Although it’s just a translated fanfic it’s readable and frankly quite entertaining .definitely worth a read .
Хороший фанфик. И главы каждый день выходят. Стоит почитать на выходных. Пока мс слабый, но позже будет сильным. Надеюсь главы дойдут до арки битвы Сайтамы с Богом!
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История не претендует на шедевр, но твердые 7 из 10. По сравнению с 95% китайских романов, этот довольно хорош. Неплохой юмор, развитие истории и более чем достойный перевод. Если вам нужно просто повеселиться не особо напрягая мозг рекомендую ознакомиться)))
the translation is good, the update is fast, and most importantly the translator doesn't have enemy
Dang...The total rating is 3.3 man that's kinda sad but yeah I already expected this. Although the story is entertaining it isn't that good either and everyone have their own opinion too. If I'm not biased I would rate this 3.9 at best and probably more if someone can translate it better unlike me but yeah I didn't do that 'cause well...I'm the translator and it kinda feels bad rating it less than 4.0. Oh yeah and about whether I will continue this until the end that's up to you guys. As long there's many of you appreciate this I will do my best. Anyway that's all from me. Hope Y'all have a good days peace~~
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It's quite a meh novel. The slight A.U. aside. The gacha and the character personalities are the main issues I have against this. Most of the time the card draws that he gets are trash and just for comedic relief... particularly women's clothing. Unless when it isn't, making you roll your eyes for the blatant asspull that the author just did. And the character personalities and dialogues could really do some work. All the character dialogues and speeches are quite bland, there's barely any difference. It isn't that bad perse... it's just really lacking with variety, and it really sticks out with the numbers of characters in this novel
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Thx! <3 Pls dont drop. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
на сколько бы хорошим не было произведение, то насколько главный герой симп для всех девушек полностью убивает впечатление. Хотя в середине автор непонятно с чего говорит как будто он опытный человек, но по поведению это 13 летний стеснительный школьник
Me gusta mucho la historia y espero que no la dejes gracias por tu tiempo invertido en escribir ❤️❤️ .,..........,.................................................................................solo eso XD
Chapter gone T_T ................,...,.,..,...,..,.,.,..,.,.,..,.......,.,...,..,..,.,....,...,..,..,.,....,...,..,....,..,..,...,.....,..,.,.....,...,.,...,.,..,.,..,......,,..,.,.,,..,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,..,...,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,..,..,.,.,....,.,..,..,.,.,..,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,...,..,.,,..,,..,,.,.,..,..,..,.,.,.,..,,..,.,.,,.,.,.,.,.,.,.
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I believe that this story deserves a higher rating, so here’s my 5 stars. Please keep it going.
the story is probably good but i really hate it when the translator don't change Chinese mc name to Japanese name.
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Great need more chapters it's lacking in chapter's! And needs more words lots of words! Add more updates it needs more updates! We need more awesome author's like you please ask your mom and dad they need to work harder!
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Muy buena, me encanta gggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggghggggggggggggggggggegegegegegegegegegegegegegegegegegegegegegegegegegegdgdgegegegegegegegegegegegegegeggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggghggggggggggggggggggegegegegegegegegegegegegegegegegegegegegegegegegegegdgdgegegegegegegegegegegegegegeg
Thanks to the author for starting to translate this fanfic, an extremely good piece of work in recent times. Thanks also for the link to the original, thanks to which the novel was read faster. Let's get to the positives: * there is no super power from the very beginning, * there is no Pokemon like a harem, * slow and harmonious relationships with the heroines, but in my opinion a hasty ending, where there is normal development and only Android No. 18 and Sykes got the end, and Soifon and Torumi were simply left off-screen in the epilogue. * in the end they tried, I don’t know, to cut off the power of ms? Otherwise, I don’t know, perhaps the limitations of the World. V in the end he doesn't have the superpower to destroy universes
a lot of typo especially on people titles as expected from mtl, mc progress in power is slow and that mainly because of how cheap his system, I mean a lot of times when he gacha he get woman clothes or trash item, it's like he only get a good item when the plot needed it.
SEGSSSSSSSSSS?????? PLEASE ANSWER!! SEGSSSSSSSSSS?????? PLEASE ANSWER!! SEGSSSSSSSSSS?????? PLEASE ANSWER!! SEGSSSSSSSSSS?????? PLEASE ANSWER!! SEGSSSSSSSSSS?????? PLEASE ANSWER!!
Although it’s just a translated fanfic it’s readable and frankly quite entertaining .definitely worth a read .
Хороший фанфик. И главы каждый день выходят. Стоит почитать на выходных. Пока мс слабый, но позже будет сильным. Надеюсь главы дойдут до арки битвы Сайтамы с Богом!
揭示劇透 История не претендует на шедевр, но твердые 7 из 10. По сравнению с 95% китайских романов, этот довольно хорош. Неплохой юмор, развитие истории и более чем достойный перевод. Если вам нужно просто повеселиться не особо напрягая мозг рекомендую ознакомиться)))
the translation is good, the update is fast, and most importantly the translator doesn't have enemy
Dang...The total rating is 3.3 man that's kinda sad but yeah I already expected this. Although the story is entertaining it isn't that good either and everyone have their own opinion too. If I'm not biased I would rate this 3.9 at best and probably more if someone can translate it better unlike me but yeah I didn't do that 'cause well...I'm the translator and it kinda feels bad rating it less than 4.0. Oh yeah and about whether I will continue this until the end that's up to you guys. As long there's many of you appreciate this I will do my best. Anyway that's all from me. Hope Y'all have a good days peace~~