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Here's a 5 stars for your first review... Yay!!!... It's actually my first time reading a fanfiction. Actually, I'm not that familiar with the Novel's Extra, I only read a few chapters for reference since I started writing. Either way, this fanfic is mostly dialogue but it is still interesting, fun to read and it has a lot of potential for improvement. Keep working, Author.
Here's a 5 stars for your first review... Yay!!!... It's actually my first time reading a fanfiction. Actually, I'm not that familiar with the Novel's Extra, I only read a few chapters for reference since I started writing. Either way, this fanfic is mostly dialogue but it is still interesting, fun to read and it has a lot of potential for improvement. Keep working, Author.