1評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
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The premise is a good one, but that's probably my own bias. I think the author could do better with characterization though. Hopefully this continues, because I enjoy it.
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寫檢討The premise is a good one, but that's probably my own bias. I think the author could do better with characterization though. Hopefully this continues, because I enjoy it.
The premise is a good one, but that's probably my own bias. I think the author could do better with characterization though. Hopefully this continues, because I enjoy it.