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This book is one of my new favorites! I don't want to give too much away. So I'll just say the split soul is used differently here than I've seen in the past, and I'm really curious to see how it ultimately works out. I'm on ch. 12 now, and the salamander just had its first evolution. 😍 So far, the transmigrated MC is level-headed, and his main issue at the start is an extremely weak body. There have already been a few times I just had to laugh, mostly because of his new friend. 😁 There are some intermittent grammatical errors, but nowhere near as many as in some other web novels.
Really liking the novel so far, I don't think I've seen any novels of this type before so I find it really intriguing. Looking forward to how this novel will end up.
It was hard to read from the beginning, it feels like a real machine translstion with a ton of editing work.
this is my favorite book. In the Age of Mythology, I Evolved Into a Stellar Behemoth.
The reason I’ve given this such a high review is because the main characters got the same birthday as me January 13 for the win
Good story but it's most likely translated by AI, wouldn't recommend as it's very hard to read.
hmm what can i say .if you are looking for a novel with a human with a beast clone then this is the one. a great novel.. love it .
Pretty good and fun read, especially the beast side is highly entertaining. The only big problem is the names, for some reason they went for translation into western names and it’s just total chaos. Some characters have 3-4 names just in a single chapter. If you can get past that and things like having no idea what the teachers gender is, it’s decent.
The translator sucks, they hide a review that are negative. My review from my other account got hidden and can't be seen from this account and only shows 18 reviews while the account i use to review shows 19 reviews. Seriously this translator is so desperate and didn't want other readers to see negative review huh. What even worse was i only talk about how the translator change the name to english sounding name and still use chinese currency, even then i still gave it quite a high star rating. Some of the other review who critic this novel also got hidden.
At this moment there are a lot of unfinished chapters left like that for weeks with note of the author that he will finish them later... (some of them came out more than 2 weeks ago), moreover, misteriously enought this happens at moments like the last part of a fight which you will never know how ends because the next chapter has already moved from it.
The English is a little broken and the writing style makes me think it might be the authors second language to it reads a little funky but that’s not that big of a deal to me. I love the characters and the story, and I definitely suggest it for anyone that’s like an OP MC, or even just an intelligent MC. And for the author specifically, your novel has actually given me a lot of joy and laughs because your characters are ridiculously hilarious, thank you so much!
I am sure there were at least a few dozen negative reviews where has it disappeared?
aside from translation quality, it's a solid story. but I'm 110 chapters in and the translation is really tempting me to quit. inconsistent names, gender, and grammar.
Everything so far is going well, the world gondo, the power system, the writing improves over time, but what is the need to add more love interests? If you already have someone, why add another girl? Also they have known each other for a few weeks while the other girl for months please author be serious, don't waste this piece of work on harem. It's just that I don't understand the need to add burden to the MC, this MC is clear that she seeks the top because she wants to be strong, why restrict her with romance or set stupid ambitions based on other people's interests, please reconsider and leave her as a friend, at the same time Just like Jane Aiken and the others, think of other works like "swallowed star" the MC is destined to overcome the limit of his cultivation system so think of that author and leave the MC free just like that author did.
揭示劇透 The truth is, although there are some spelling mistakes, I like the story, to start with the fact that the romance is completely directed at the FMC by the MC, instead of the MC concentrating on being with everyone at the same time, he knows that There comes a time when you must stop maintaining a low profile, it is just what you are looking for in a cultivation novel, we can see both aspects of having the beast personality where you can free yourself and the other more human one that is more controlled. Well now some aspects: Power system. For now I am liking it, although I see a lot of potential, to be able to expand on a universal scale, although there is still no good explanation of the levels above the ninth layer, I feel that since cultivation civilization is so recent, I think that after reaching the world Mystic could use a larger scale expansion, but overall it looks great. Construction of the world. It is making very good progress and I can say that I like how the characters are being introduced, the MC's companions are very good with their gradual advances, their backgrounds and attitudes agree with it, and on the part of the beast that has accepted that personality without the nonsense of "I'm human, I'm different and don't compare me to them" has assumed that both parties are one, I love that, and they have left out many clichés like "cold academy goddess who kills the MC" because it is more of a rivalry that does not involve those feelings and in more than 500 chapters, "the best fat friend in the academy" we see his best friend who not only is not fat but has a good history of good looks and may end up with the class leader, although they try to put her on the MC's side, her relationship seems better with this friend and I like it because the MC doesn't monopolize all the women and his friends are outstanding enough in their own way to stand out to a certain point, a good development, and the best, the federation and the experts who offer to take the geniuses to that world although I suspect that there is something wrong, it is my assumption since a certain genius betrayed humanity after going, so his reason will have and maybe they tried to get something out of him, but I like the attitude of genius being given resources and not the nonsense of superiors limiting young people, if this happened in other novels hundreds of filler chapters would be saved, I like the original.
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To not spoil things, I’ll just say that I really love this serious once the MC gets to the ocean. I think I like those chapters more than the land ones 🤣 If people hold off their judgment until then you’ll be able to decide if you really enjoy this series or not!
I won’t lie, the beginning is rough especially the translation of names, but if you stick with it, it gets a lot better. The story itself is quite fun, the dual perspectives are interesting. It’s very good for this type of story. I do recommend getting past the first 30-40 before judging it.
até onde eu li é um livro mto bom, sem personagens arrogantes que merecem tapa na cara, mc inteligente sem sangue quente , mundo interessante sobre feras extraordinarias , estrutura de poder estavel, bom livro pra acompanhar seriamente , acho que isso se tornara popular se continuar assim.
The story is great and very unique from other similar works on this platform. My only big criticism is that the fights are not realistic at all. The main character frequently uses a sword by hacking at armored enemies as if it were an axe, which is just stupid. The story, character development, and world building are great, and the lackluster fights don't really take anything away from it, but it's annoying as someone who is fascinated by swords and by history. Still giving it five stars because the beast is very well executed, and I don't think Webnovel has a better novel than this one for beast-cultivator combinations.
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For starters it has a nice beginning so I hope they don't drop it in thr future and keep updating
this is a wonderfull book im enjoying it alot please keep up with the updates bro its a very good book and a differnt take on the beast taming genre
This book is one of my new favorites! I don't want to give too much away. So I'll just say the split soul is used differently here than I've seen in the past, and I'm really curious to see how it ultimately works out. I'm on ch. 12 now, and the salamander just had its first evolution. 😍 So far, the transmigrated MC is level-headed, and his main issue at the start is an extremely weak body. There have already been a few times I just had to laugh, mostly because of his new friend. 😁 There are some intermittent grammatical errors, but nowhere near as many as in some other web novels.
Really liking the novel so far, I don't think I've seen any novels of this type before so I find it really intriguing. Looking forward to how this novel will end up.
It was hard to read from the beginning, it feels like a real machine translstion with a ton of editing work.
this is my favorite book. In the Age of Mythology, I Evolved Into a Stellar Behemoth.
The reason I’ve given this such a high review is because the main characters got the same birthday as me January 13 for the win
Good story but it's most likely translated by AI, wouldn't recommend as it's very hard to read.
hmm what can i say .if you are looking for a novel with a human with a beast clone then this is the one. a great novel.. love it .
Pretty good and fun read, especially the beast side is highly entertaining. The only big problem is the names, for some reason they went for translation into western names and it’s just total chaos. Some characters have 3-4 names just in a single chapter. If you can get past that and things like having no idea what the teachers gender is, it’s decent.
The translator sucks, they hide a review that are negative. My review from my other account got hidden and can't be seen from this account and only shows 18 reviews while the account i use to review shows 19 reviews. Seriously this translator is so desperate and didn't want other readers to see negative review huh. What even worse was i only talk about how the translator change the name to english sounding name and still use chinese currency, even then i still gave it quite a high star rating. Some of the other review who critic this novel also got hidden.
At this moment there are a lot of unfinished chapters left like that for weeks with note of the author that he will finish them later... (some of them came out more than 2 weeks ago), moreover, misteriously enought this happens at moments like the last part of a fight which you will never know how ends because the next chapter has already moved from it.
The English is a little broken and the writing style makes me think it might be the authors second language to it reads a little funky but that’s not that big of a deal to me. I love the characters and the story, and I definitely suggest it for anyone that’s like an OP MC, or even just an intelligent MC. And for the author specifically, your novel has actually given me a lot of joy and laughs because your characters are ridiculously hilarious, thank you so much!
I am sure there were at least a few dozen negative reviews where has it disappeared?
aside from translation quality, it's a solid story. but I'm 110 chapters in and the translation is really tempting me to quit. inconsistent names, gender, and grammar.
Everything so far is going well, the world gondo, the power system, the writing improves over time, but what is the need to add more love interests? If you already have someone, why add another girl? Also they have known each other for a few weeks while the other girl for months please author be serious, don't waste this piece of work on harem. It's just that I don't understand the need to add burden to the MC, this MC is clear that she seeks the top because she wants to be strong, why restrict her with romance or set stupid ambitions based on other people's interests, please reconsider and leave her as a friend, at the same time Just like Jane Aiken and the others, think of other works like "swallowed star" the MC is destined to overcome the limit of his cultivation system so think of that author and leave the MC free just like that author did.
揭示劇透 The truth is, although there are some spelling mistakes, I like the story, to start with the fact that the romance is completely directed at the FMC by the MC, instead of the MC concentrating on being with everyone at the same time, he knows that There comes a time when you must stop maintaining a low profile, it is just what you are looking for in a cultivation novel, we can see both aspects of having the beast personality where you can free yourself and the other more human one that is more controlled. Well now some aspects: Power system. For now I am liking it, although I see a lot of potential, to be able to expand on a universal scale, although there is still no good explanation of the levels above the ninth layer, I feel that since cultivation civilization is so recent, I think that after reaching the world Mystic could use a larger scale expansion, but overall it looks great. Construction of the world. It is making very good progress and I can say that I like how the characters are being introduced, the MC's companions are very good with their gradual advances, their backgrounds and attitudes agree with it, and on the part of the beast that has accepted that personality without the nonsense of "I'm human, I'm different and don't compare me to them" has assumed that both parties are one, I love that, and they have left out many clichés like "cold academy goddess who kills the MC" because it is more of a rivalry that does not involve those feelings and in more than 500 chapters, "the best fat friend in the academy" we see his best friend who not only is not fat but has a good history of good looks and may end up with the class leader, although they try to put her on the MC's side, her relationship seems better with this friend and I like it because the MC doesn't monopolize all the women and his friends are outstanding enough in their own way to stand out to a certain point, a good development, and the best, the federation and the experts who offer to take the geniuses to that world although I suspect that there is something wrong, it is my assumption since a certain genius betrayed humanity after going, so his reason will have and maybe they tried to get something out of him, but I like the attitude of genius being given resources and not the nonsense of superiors limiting young people, if this happened in other novels hundreds of filler chapters would be saved, I like the original.
揭示劇透 To not spoil things, I’ll just say that I really love this serious once the MC gets to the ocean. I think I like those chapters more than the land ones 🤣 If people hold off their judgment until then you’ll be able to decide if you really enjoy this series or not!
I won’t lie, the beginning is rough especially the translation of names, but if you stick with it, it gets a lot better. The story itself is quite fun, the dual perspectives are interesting. It’s very good for this type of story. I do recommend getting past the first 30-40 before judging it.
até onde eu li é um livro mto bom, sem personagens arrogantes que merecem tapa na cara, mc inteligente sem sangue quente , mundo interessante sobre feras extraordinarias , estrutura de poder estavel, bom livro pra acompanhar seriamente , acho que isso se tornara popular se continuar assim.
The story is great and very unique from other similar works on this platform. My only big criticism is that the fights are not realistic at all. The main character frequently uses a sword by hacking at armored enemies as if it were an axe, which is just stupid. The story, character development, and world building are great, and the lackluster fights don't really take anything away from it, but it's annoying as someone who is fascinated by swords and by history. Still giving it five stars because the beast is very well executed, and I don't think Webnovel has a better novel than this one for beast-cultivator combinations.
揭示劇透 For starters it has a nice beginning so I hope they don't drop it in thr future and keep updating
this is a wonderfull book im enjoying it alot please keep up with the updates bro its a very good book and a differnt take on the beast taming genre