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Great HunterXHunter Fanfic 🏹✖️🏹👍 Even though this is a translation work its well done with little to no grammatical errors, story is fun and captivating to read.The story itself is good, not perfect, but still good.🤠
This novel is by far one of the best HxH ffs out there!! The transition is fantastic, the characters are awesome, the story progression is just right! All in all, an amazing read!! I’m a fan of action/adventure novels with a romantic element, however, I am still not sure where it is mentioned or portrayed in this novel so far. Don’t get me wrong, it doesn’t take away from the novel’s appeal and enjoyment. But I would like to know if it will come out some time in the future.
Even though this is a translation work its well done with little to no grammatical errors, story is fun and captivating to read.The story itself is good, not perfect, but still good.🙄🤪
*Slight Spoiler Warning* Have read the ongoing MTL. This fanfic is so good as a story and also the world building is top notch, you don't feel like the author undermining a certain character or just deny them their character. So in term of the world building this is very good for a fanfic. Now the romance is a single female lead which is definitely a plus for me and their interaction is just so fun, you will know who she is once you read it but i won't spoil too much. The character progression is also worth it, you can feel as the MC is integrating to the world and not just feels like an observer. Honestly the system was kinda a mute point for me but it gets pushed aside and not becoming important in the latter part of the story. Overall a very decent read and i highly highly recommend for those looking for a good fanfic. 9/10
it's a documentary, not a fanfiction xD it's a documentary, not a fanfiction xD it's a documentary, not a fanfiction xD it's a documentary, not a fanfiction xD
Fanfiction que apresenta elemntos do bloodborn no universo HunterxHunter, MC apresenta poderes interessantes que permitem com que ele se transporte para o continente negro onde ele enfrenta mosntros e volta com seus despojos
any one know HxH novel ?! pls let me know هههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههه هههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههه
This is a great novel if you love HXH and want to see an expansion on the world development. Also many might notice this is not the original. This version is so much better not as many grammar mistakes. To the author keep up the good work.
Thanks for the novel, I hope you keep going with the a great work +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
Amazing, I finished it in one sitting, I wish I had found this gem when there were more episodes.
MC isn't a Mary sue nor is he a murder hobo (he does kill DW). starts at middle tier strength and gets stronger through killing powerful creatures by obtaining points to increase stats and weapons which he conjures (Bloodborne weapons). so far so good
Great story so far!!! I just miss a better characterization of the character, every moment it is said that he is "beautiful" but we don't have any photos of him.
👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥🌞🌞🌞🌞🌞🌞🌞🌞🌞🌞🌞🌞🌞🌞👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐
not bad. although I don't like plots where Mac gathers some organization or group, here it seems 70% logical.
Great HunterXHunter Fanfic 🏹✖️🏹👍 Even though this is a translation work its well done with little to no grammatical errors, story is fun and captivating to read.The story itself is good, not perfect, but still good.🤠
This novel is by far one of the best HxH ffs out there!! The transition is fantastic, the characters are awesome, the story progression is just right! All in all, an amazing read!! I’m a fan of action/adventure novels with a romantic element, however, I am still not sure where it is mentioned or portrayed in this novel so far. Don’t get me wrong, it doesn’t take away from the novel’s appeal and enjoyment. But I would like to know if it will come out some time in the future.
Even though this is a translation work its well done with little to no grammatical errors, story is fun and captivating to read.The story itself is good, not perfect, but still good.🙄🤪
*Slight Spoiler Warning* Have read the ongoing MTL. This fanfic is so good as a story and also the world building is top notch, you don't feel like the author undermining a certain character or just deny them their character. So in term of the world building this is very good for a fanfic. Now the romance is a single female lead which is definitely a plus for me and their interaction is just so fun, you will know who she is once you read it but i won't spoil too much. The character progression is also worth it, you can feel as the MC is integrating to the world and not just feels like an observer. Honestly the system was kinda a mute point for me but it gets pushed aside and not becoming important in the latter part of the story. Overall a very decent read and i highly highly recommend for those looking for a good fanfic. 9/10
it's a documentary, not a fanfiction xD it's a documentary, not a fanfiction xD it's a documentary, not a fanfiction xD it's a documentary, not a fanfiction xD
Fanfiction que apresenta elemntos do bloodborn no universo HunterxHunter, MC apresenta poderes interessantes que permitem com que ele se transporte para o continente negro onde ele enfrenta mosntros e volta com seus despojos
any one know HxH novel ?! pls let me know هههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههه هههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههه
This is a great novel if you love HXH and want to see an expansion on the world development. Also many might notice this is not the original. This version is so much better not as many grammar mistakes. To the author keep up the good work.
Thanks for the novel, I hope you keep going with the a great work +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
Amazing, I finished it in one sitting, I wish I had found this gem when there were more episodes.
MC isn't a Mary sue nor is he a murder hobo (he does kill DW). starts at middle tier strength and gets stronger through killing powerful creatures by obtaining points to increase stats and weapons which he conjures (Bloodborne weapons). so far so good
Great story so far!!! I just miss a better characterization of the character, every moment it is said that he is "beautiful" but we don't have any photos of him.
👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥🌞🌞🌞🌞🌞🌞🌞🌞🌞🌞🌞🌞🌞🌞👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐
not bad. although I don't like plots where Mac gathers some organization or group, here it seems 70% logical.