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I am genuinely baffled as to why this story is rated so high. The first chapter is literally the worst chapter I've ever read. And the few chapters after it aren't much better. I can only assume people are giving it high ratings for the Andrew Tate memes.
can we get more pls🫡 it's very good and I want more before I get to the last chapter i haven't finished it but i want more
stopped reading this when he got WORLD item that let him fly for half speed of his original speed..there is also appraisal google that's world item..
The only and biggest problem is that there is Andrew tate in this fic. And my brain cannot handle him calling mc "Top G" like a fan girl.
Hello how are you thank you very much for the chapter yes more chapters come on come on more chapters come on come on
many grammatical error, quite a bit of inconsistency and all around not a pleasant read. i wish the author good luck in their future endeavors
Hello, how are you? Thank you very much for the topic. More chapters, come on. More chapters, come on
I've only read the first 3 chapters, but im already liking this Fanfic.Good job 👍
I can't understand why the updates for Overlord fanfics are so infrequent. I absolutely love Overlord and have been searching for fanfics based on the web novel, but it's been disappointing to find that many of them are either dropped or have very irregular updates. I have three amazing Overlord fanfics in my library, but they only update one or two chapters per week. I'm really craving more good Overlord fanfics to read.I suppose I'll just have to be patient and hope that the authors continue updating their stories. It can be frustrating, but I'm grateful that there are still dedicated writers out there creating content for the Overlord fandom. In the meantime, I'll just have to reread my favorite fanfics and maybe even try my hand at writing my own.
I'm with Great_Maid_Oni on this one. The dialogues and fights are quite dragging and could use some pick-up. As for MC's power, I'm not entirely convinced. He's supposed to be OP, but the fight against the goat head was unexpectedly long and made me question his strength. I know he wasn't going all out, but with those impressive stats, I expected him to crush the goat head a lil bit faster.The author also mentioned that the powerful entity like this goat head on this high continent is around 200-250, but I'm hoping we don't fall into the typical cultivation trope where the MC is always encountering stronger opponents. after all, I come to this cuz of the OP tagCurrently still under 100 chapters, so I'm still holding onto hope.
Everything sounds like a wet dream of the author, even having the same name, the quality is mid compared to other overlord fics but its still abit better than MTL
I'm late with this review, I'm doing this sincerely, I don't want to diminish or offend anyone. let's go . The story addresses a player character who is the strongest from the beginning, has some holes but is well done, maintains the proposed standard without many personality variations (he was supposed to be evil but is nice or something, that doesn't happen). The case of approaching a dragon character is interesting because in the OC it was something frustrating to see and here we have the opportunity for a new development that is perhaps more interesting. the scenario hasn't been explored much yet, but we're still at the beginning of the story, -100 chapters, basically we have a completely authorial scenario and that excites me a lot... The writing is a weak point in the story, the quality has been improving with new chapters, but we still have some problems. The dialogues and fights are tiring and slow, we managed to skip the whole event and we won't miss much, this in my opinion is a big problem. recently in the last chapters I see a lot of description about smoking, if it were only a few times that would be fine, but it is already in a quantity that is starting to bother, is it really necessary to have one or two paragraphs describing the plant you are smoking? The main positive point is the author, I really liked him! He was very attentive to his readers, responded to our comments and was always open to opinions and suggestions, this makes me really happy and motivates me to continue following his work…. Thank you for your work, I hope to see you growing even more!!
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Thank you very much, finaly Overlord FF who has both Lemons and regular updates,
I am looking forward to the new episodes with impatience ( MAY THE FORCE BE WITH YOU)[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend]
Writing quality is kinda mid compared to some novels. Many spelling mistakes. Plot and way author writes is good but the spelling is kinda holding it back a little. Overall a good novel to read
Do to it being an overlord fanfic 5 stars, but I have a question before I read it when does he go to the new world?
it's a great overlord FF one of the rare ones and i appreciate you making this FF.
A really great overlord fanfic I Hope this story get completed and continue please don't author its rare nowadays to find great overlord fanfic in ongoing
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I am genuinely baffled as to why this story is rated so high. The first chapter is literally the worst chapter I've ever read. And the few chapters after it aren't much better. I can only assume people are giving it high ratings for the Andrew Tate memes.
can we get more pls🫡 it's very good and I want more before I get to the last chapter i haven't finished it but i want more
stopped reading this when he got WORLD item that let him fly for half speed of his original speed..there is also appraisal google that's world item..
The only and biggest problem is that there is Andrew tate in this fic. And my brain cannot handle him calling mc "Top G" like a fan girl.
Hello how are you thank you very much for the chapter yes more chapters come on come on more chapters come on come on
many grammatical error, quite a bit of inconsistency and all around not a pleasant read. i wish the author good luck in their future endeavors
Hello, how are you? Thank you very much for the topic. More chapters, come on. More chapters, come on
I've only read the first 3 chapters, but im already liking this Fanfic.Good job 👍
I can't understand why the updates for Overlord fanfics are so infrequent. I absolutely love Overlord and have been searching for fanfics based on the web novel, but it's been disappointing to find that many of them are either dropped or have very irregular updates. I have three amazing Overlord fanfics in my library, but they only update one or two chapters per week. I'm really craving more good Overlord fanfics to read.I suppose I'll just have to be patient and hope that the authors continue updating their stories. It can be frustrating, but I'm grateful that there are still dedicated writers out there creating content for the Overlord fandom. In the meantime, I'll just have to reread my favorite fanfics and maybe even try my hand at writing my own.
I'm with Great_Maid_Oni on this one. The dialogues and fights are quite dragging and could use some pick-up. As for MC's power, I'm not entirely convinced. He's supposed to be OP, but the fight against the goat head was unexpectedly long and made me question his strength. I know he wasn't going all out, but with those impressive stats, I expected him to crush the goat head a lil bit faster.The author also mentioned that the powerful entity like this goat head on this high continent is around 200-250, but I'm hoping we don't fall into the typical cultivation trope where the MC is always encountering stronger opponents. after all, I come to this cuz of the OP tagCurrently still under 100 chapters, so I'm still holding onto hope.
Everything sounds like a wet dream of the author, even having the same name, the quality is mid compared to other overlord fics but its still abit better than MTL
I'm late with this review, I'm doing this sincerely, I don't want to diminish or offend anyone. let's go . The story addresses a player character who is the strongest from the beginning, has some holes but is well done, maintains the proposed standard without many personality variations (he was supposed to be evil but is nice or something, that doesn't happen). The case of approaching a dragon character is interesting because in the OC it was something frustrating to see and here we have the opportunity for a new development that is perhaps more interesting. the scenario hasn't been explored much yet, but we're still at the beginning of the story, -100 chapters, basically we have a completely authorial scenario and that excites me a lot... The writing is a weak point in the story, the quality has been improving with new chapters, but we still have some problems. The dialogues and fights are tiring and slow, we managed to skip the whole event and we won't miss much, this in my opinion is a big problem. recently in the last chapters I see a lot of description about smoking, if it were only a few times that would be fine, but it is already in a quantity that is starting to bother, is it really necessary to have one or two paragraphs describing the plant you are smoking? The main positive point is the author, I really liked him! He was very attentive to his readers, responded to our comments and was always open to opinions and suggestions, this makes me really happy and motivates me to continue following his work…. Thank you for your work, I hope to see you growing even more!!
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Thank you very much, finaly Overlord FF who has both Lemons and regular updates,
I am looking forward to the new episodes with impatience ( MAY THE FORCE BE WITH YOU)[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend]
Writing quality is kinda mid compared to some novels. Many spelling mistakes. Plot and way author writes is good but the spelling is kinda holding it back a little. Overall a good novel to read
Do to it being an overlord fanfic 5 stars, but I have a question before I read it when does he go to the new world?
it's a great overlord FF one of the rare ones and i appreciate you making this FF.
A really great overlord fanfic I Hope this story get completed and continue please don't author its rare nowadays to find great overlord fanfic in ongoing