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Very good novel,Very good novel,Very good novel,Very good novel,Very good novel,Very good novel,Very good novel,Very good novel,Very good novel,Very good novel,
The grammer of the fanfic is alright.The mc is not a simp so you dont have to worry about seeing mc trying to build a harem and mc does not save all beauty in trouble which will give him trouble later. Also the fanfic is more focus on the story and as for romance i cant say as the female has not arrive yet or which girl is the lead i dont know
this is the best douluo dalu fan fiction novel I ever read. don't not just ignore this novel this is the hidden jade. everyone has to try it once and continue if you like it.
What is the name of the raw? You should put the original name and the authors name in description.
This novel readable if you just ignore many translator inconsistent with their translate I really expect it this novel has same quality like Doulou Ronin if the Translator fix their translation. - Readable - Many Grammar mistakes on power term in soul land ( Soul Power, Name of beast, Name of items)
If Tang san is Arrogant then MC is more Arrogant.. .. no sense of realism and Plot sucks
История довольно интересная и весёлая. Читается легко. Конечно, и недостатки присутствуют. Например гг, который поднимает свои ранги как на ракете, кольца душ у него из ничего появляются, боевого духа его никто не видел, и все дружно это игнорируют, буд-то так и должно быть. Расстроен тем, что он не забрал кость души А Инь, да и на арене мог чаще сражаться, очки себе зарабатывать, вроде бы очевидные варианты. Надеюсь на продолжение и пусть муза вас не покидает.
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2 coisas que acredito deveriam ter colocado na história 1: mais técnicas de espada só que apenas a técnica de desenhar a espada. 2: mc e um personagem extremamente bruto sem possuir nenhuma tática ou plano reserva considerando, o mundo que ele foi parar, agir dessa forma e estúpido
a trash novel of Chinese and even this translation is trash, could have removed many things but nah you still wanna add it. piece uf garbage.
very good novel thx........................................................................................................................ lao also raws?
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Good I want my daily updates So yeah it's not the best fic but it's good and bit funny.........................................................
I really like the mc's personality i just hope this won't turn into a harem and i know this would cuz its xianxia its just i hope!! 🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹 Im giving all 5 stars except Translation quality cuz there's still some problems with the grammar, that's all is the problems i have on this novel and please more chaps 😍😍
Good I want my daily updates So yeah it’s not the best fic but it’s good and bit funny
Read till chapter 9 translation looks good so far. Good to see an self centered mc In Douluo
Valió la pena!!! ......................................................................................................................................................................................................
Very good novel,Very good novel,Very good novel,Very good novel,Very good novel,Very good novel,Very good novel,Very good novel,Very good novel,Very good novel,
The grammer of the fanfic is alright.The mc is not a simp so you dont have to worry about seeing mc trying to build a harem and mc does not save all beauty in trouble which will give him trouble later. Also the fanfic is more focus on the story and as for romance i cant say as the female has not arrive yet or which girl is the lead i dont know
this is the best douluo dalu fan fiction novel I ever read. don't not just ignore this novel this is the hidden jade. everyone has to try it once and continue if you like it.
What is the name of the raw? You should put the original name and the authors name in description.
This novel readable if you just ignore many translator inconsistent with their translate I really expect it this novel has same quality like Doulou Ronin if the Translator fix their translation. - Readable - Many Grammar mistakes on power term in soul land ( Soul Power, Name of beast, Name of items)
If Tang san is Arrogant then MC is more Arrogant.. .. no sense of realism and Plot sucks
История довольно интересная и весёлая. Читается легко. Конечно, и недостатки присутствуют. Например гг, который поднимает свои ранги как на ракете, кольца душ у него из ничего появляются, боевого духа его никто не видел, и все дружно это игнорируют, буд-то так и должно быть. Расстроен тем, что он не забрал кость души А Инь, да и на арене мог чаще сражаться, очки себе зарабатывать, вроде бы очевидные варианты. Надеюсь на продолжение и пусть муза вас не покидает.
揭示劇透 2 coisas que acredito deveriam ter colocado na história 1: mais técnicas de espada só que apenas a técnica de desenhar a espada. 2: mc e um personagem extremamente bruto sem possuir nenhuma tática ou plano reserva considerando, o mundo que ele foi parar, agir dessa forma e estúpido
a trash novel of Chinese and even this translation is trash, could have removed many things but nah you still wanna add it. piece uf garbage.
very good novel thx........................................................................................................................ lao also raws?
Good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good
Good I want my daily updates So yeah it's not the best fic but it's good and bit funny.........................................................
I really like the mc's personality i just hope this won't turn into a harem and i know this would cuz its xianxia its just i hope!! 🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹 Im giving all 5 stars except Translation quality cuz there's still some problems with the grammar, that's all is the problems i have on this novel and please more chaps 😍😍
Good I want my daily updates So yeah it’s not the best fic but it’s good and bit funny
Read till chapter 9 translation looks good so far. Good to see an self centered mc In Douluo
Valió la pena!!! ......................................................................................................................................................................................................