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the people giving this anything other than a 1 star have to be bots, or author is deleting all 1 star reviews. just read the first chapter and you'll understand, or the synopsis both are equally terrible
It's an great story which I would like to read more of but I think the author should edit chapters and read some good novels to get know how of writing format as this story needs it
Overall, very good story and I very much enjoyed because I’ve been looking for like a boys kind of superhero or just character character development a little bit of feel like it’s a little too fast and we don’t get really why he wants to be like soldier boy, but story everything else has been really good can’t wait to see the next chapter
He dont fly, He dont fly, He dont fly, He dont fly, He dont fly, He dont fly, He dont fly, He dont fly, He dont fly, He dont fly, He dont fly, He dont fly, He dont fly, He dont fly,
Now the story is I like the concept of having soldier boys powers and all but it’s the spelling errors that makes me rate this story so low like the erros in spelling are so bad that it confuses me and I have to reread a text 2 or 3 times so I can understand it. I feel like if the author used grammarly even without the premium version would have made the story for me at least 4/5 stars.
the people giving this anything other than a 1 star have to be bots, or author is deleting all 1 star reviews. just read the first chapter and you'll understand, or the synopsis both are equally terrible
It's an great story which I would like to read more of but I think the author should edit chapters and read some good novels to get know how of writing format as this story needs it
Overall, very good story and I very much enjoyed because I’ve been looking for like a boys kind of superhero or just character character development a little bit of feel like it’s a little too fast and we don’t get really why he wants to be like soldier boy, but story everything else has been really good can’t wait to see the next chapter
He dont fly, He dont fly, He dont fly, He dont fly, He dont fly, He dont fly, He dont fly, He dont fly, He dont fly, He dont fly, He dont fly, He dont fly, He dont fly, He dont fly,
Now the story is I like the concept of having soldier boys powers and all but it’s the spelling errors that makes me rate this story so low like the erros in spelling are so bad that it confuses me and I have to reread a text 2 or 3 times so I can understand it. I feel like if the author used grammarly even without the premium version would have made the story for me at least 4/5 stars.