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ALL 5 STARS. It's an entertaining start with the shock of MC & Powers of Elements and Martial Arts. Well, the first chapter is/was interesting. Hopefully pray that AUTHOR will make this a complete story artfully & making the STORY great. NOTE: Martial Arts: means both Armed & Unarmed Way of Combat. Training to be in sync - Mentally, Physically & Spiritually. Saying it coz nowadays people think of MARTIAL ARTS as only Unarmed Combat, For MARTIALS ARTS is Way of Combat in both Armed & Unarmed. Training to be in sync - Mentally, Physically & Spiritually.
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ALL 5 STARS. It's an entertaining start with the shock of MC & Powers of Elements and Martial Arts. Well, the first chapter is/was interesting. Hopefully pray that AUTHOR will make this a complete story artfully & making the STORY great. NOTE: Martial Arts: means both Armed & Unarmed Way of Combat. Training to be in sync - Mentally, Physically & Spiritually. Saying it coz nowadays people think of MARTIAL ARTS as only Unarmed Combat, For MARTIALS ARTS is Way of Combat in both Armed & Unarmed. Training to be in sync - Mentally, Physically & Spiritually.
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