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THIS VENERABLE ALMOST DID NOT READ THIS GEM BECAUSE OF SOME PEASENTS SHARING THEIR VIEW OF LOW INTELLECT. BEWARE O WANDERER NEVER TRUST THE VIEWS OF PEASENTS AND MAKE YOUR OWN WAY!!
Absolute trash. The author tries so hard to seem smart but its clear he’s a failed person. To give you an idea of how bad it is, the author starts the story by descr someone as “half Korean half American”
The New Cover is good, and that jail bar which give an immersion of imprisonment very much, I like it. It make one wonder wether it's the MC who put his brainwashed girls in a cage, or it's the girls who turns yandere and caged the MC as their property instead 😅😆🤣
I love the story ,the characters ,everything but please author what is Your discord account for art illustration
Author-san, can I use your awesome novel cover picture for my profile pictures???? Here is All Five Stars on All Five Categories for Yours Truly 😆🤩🌠🌟🌠⭐🌠🌟✨🤩😆
Does anyone know a novel like I, The Son of Luck's Father is the Hidden Villain of the Book? Introduce me too.
really didn't like the mc, and his plot armor is so thick that it's not even funny.
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Although I liked the premise of the story, the way the author names their characters made me drop almost instantly. The author is using korean names completely wrong and it makes me cringe. For example, Ji-Hoon Alyssa is the first female character introduced where Ji-hoon is supposed to be the last name and Alyssa is her first name. Ji-hoon is a first name for a boy in korea. Last names are usually one syllable i.e. Kim, Lee, Park, etc. while first names are two syllables like Ji-hoon. I tried powering though and ignoring it but this tiny detail makes this novel completely unreadable for me. Writing- About what you expect for a webnovel time waster MC- Supposed to be some amalgamation of villainous actions with hypocritical righteous inner monologue to depict some realism but comes off disjointed. Also he dumb. Story- Bleh Premise- Promising for a fun villain type lemon story but doesn't deliver
novel is a good read. It's refreshing to read an MC who's not brain dead and actually uses his mind.
garbage cliche worthless novel. good to pass the time. worthless otherwise. loser mc. cliche tropes everywhere every second, mc is "smart" for plot conveniences. dont waste ur time.
"Mission Reward : Mind Break Unlock ] [Mission Penalty : Erectile dysfunction]" I hate this type of system, let's drop this too high rate. Say no to forced, abusive systems!
had a very good start with the story having a good development pace, but after the main revenge plot it gets terribly weak, maybe it will improve but I'm not willing to pay until it gets there, but as far as I've read the only criticism is the excess of mc's self reflection
This story starts out well with the mc being the underdog making mistakes and learning from them. But it then changes to average urban novel with gang wars and slice of life. If I had not read the first part, I would have thought this is a different book.
Very good, I’m loving it, the more I read the more captivated I’m…!!! Thanks, author…!!!
Hello author! I would like to know if there is ntr in the work (I hope not) or yuri (I hope not). I would also like to know how many girls are currently in the harem, and if there are any yanderes... please answer me.
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Its just so good. I'm so used to dealing with boring mc's that do braindead stuff for no reason that this novel genuinely shocked me. It has an mc who actually thinks and does stuff that he wants with his powers. A really refreshing break from the commonplace garbage being developed rn, thank you author for this amazing read.
მაგარია მომწონს იმედია კიდევ უფრო მეტი დრო გაატარეთ კიდევ უფრო მეტი დრო გაატარეთ კიდევ უფრო მეტი დრო გაატარეთ კიდევ უფრო მეტი დრო გაატარეთ კიდევ უფრო მეტი
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5/5. Read this book. Read this book. Read this book. Read this book. Read this book. Read this book. Read this book. Read this book. Read this book. Read this book.
Reviewing this book again after reading 50 chapters. The author remained consistent in providing quality content and I'm glad that this novel gets 3 chapters per day upload because this story is just too addictive.It just shows how dedicated the author is in providing content. Kudos to the author.
This novel is the kind that grows on you as you read further. The author's skill in creating plot twists and mind games is really impressive, even though I sometimes catch myself questioning the action of the MC. Then suddenly, just like the "I have you in the first half" meme, the author surprises me with a twist that completely changes my perspective. Making me laugh because I can't believe that I did not see it coming .
I enjoyed reading this, it would be really nice if you keep building on the characters so they won't be irrelevant later on. Looking forward to more chapters.
the quality of this novel is better than most of the one's i have read. the flow of the story is also good keep it up
Thank you for reading my book. I won't talk too much about it , so I'll let you decide if it's good or not. Feel free to ask me anything here, and I'll do my best to respond. I'm not a very serious person btw, so I tend to inject humor into my responses.
THIS VENERABLE ALMOST DID NOT READ THIS GEM BECAUSE OF SOME PEASENTS SHARING THEIR VIEW OF LOW INTELLECT. BEWARE O WANDERER NEVER TRUST THE VIEWS OF PEASENTS AND MAKE YOUR OWN WAY!!
Absolute trash. The author tries so hard to seem smart but its clear he’s a failed person. To give you an idea of how bad it is, the author starts the story by descr someone as “half Korean half American”
The New Cover is good, and that jail bar which give an immersion of imprisonment very much, I like it. It make one wonder wether it's the MC who put his brainwashed girls in a cage, or it's the girls who turns yandere and caged the MC as their property instead 😅😆🤣
I love the story ,the characters ,everything but please author what is Your discord account for art illustration
Author-san, can I use your awesome novel cover picture for my profile pictures???? Here is All Five Stars on All Five Categories for Yours Truly 😆🤩🌠🌟🌠⭐🌠🌟✨🤩😆
Does anyone know a novel like I, The Son of Luck's Father is the Hidden Villain of the Book? Introduce me too.
really didn't like the mc, and his plot armor is so thick that it's not even funny.
OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!OK,!!
Although I liked the premise of the story, the way the author names their characters made me drop almost instantly. The author is using korean names completely wrong and it makes me cringe. For example, Ji-Hoon Alyssa is the first female character introduced where Ji-hoon is supposed to be the last name and Alyssa is her first name. Ji-hoon is a first name for a boy in korea. Last names are usually one syllable i.e. Kim, Lee, Park, etc. while first names are two syllables like Ji-hoon. I tried powering though and ignoring it but this tiny detail makes this novel completely unreadable for me. Writing- About what you expect for a webnovel time waster MC- Supposed to be some amalgamation of villainous actions with hypocritical righteous inner monologue to depict some realism but comes off disjointed. Also he dumb. Story- Bleh Premise- Promising for a fun villain type lemon story but doesn't deliver
novel is a good read. It's refreshing to read an MC who's not brain dead and actually uses his mind.
garbage cliche worthless novel. good to pass the time. worthless otherwise. loser mc. cliche tropes everywhere every second, mc is "smart" for plot conveniences. dont waste ur time.
"Mission Reward : Mind Break Unlock ] [Mission Penalty : Erectile dysfunction]" I hate this type of system, let's drop this too high rate. Say no to forced, abusive systems!
had a very good start with the story having a good development pace, but after the main revenge plot it gets terribly weak, maybe it will improve but I'm not willing to pay until it gets there, but as far as I've read the only criticism is the excess of mc's self reflection
This story starts out well with the mc being the underdog making mistakes and learning from them. But it then changes to average urban novel with gang wars and slice of life. If I had not read the first part, I would have thought this is a different book.
Very good, I’m loving it, the more I read the more captivated I’m…!!! Thanks, author…!!!
Hello author! I would like to know if there is ntr in the work (I hope not) or yuri (I hope not). I would also like to know how many girls are currently in the harem, and if there are any yanderes... please answer me.
Xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx
揭示劇透 Its just so good. I'm so used to dealing with boring mc's that do braindead stuff for no reason that this novel genuinely shocked me. It has an mc who actually thinks and does stuff that he wants with his powers. A really refreshing break from the commonplace garbage being developed rn, thank you author for this amazing read.
მაგარია მომწონს იმედია კიდევ უფრო მეტი დრო გაატარეთ კიდევ უფრო მეტი დრო გაატარეთ კიდევ უფრო მეტი დრო გაატარეთ კიდევ უფრო მეტი დრო გაატარეთ კიდევ უფრო მეტი
揭示劇透 5/5. Read this book. Read this book. Read this book. Read this book. Read this book. Read this book. Read this book. Read this book. Read this book. Read this book.
Reviewing this book again after reading 50 chapters. The author remained consistent in providing quality content and I'm glad that this novel gets 3 chapters per day upload because this story is just too addictive.It just shows how dedicated the author is in providing content. Kudos to the author.
This novel is the kind that grows on you as you read further. The author's skill in creating plot twists and mind games is really impressive, even though I sometimes catch myself questioning the action of the MC. Then suddenly, just like the "I have you in the first half" meme, the author surprises me with a twist that completely changes my perspective. Making me laugh because I can't believe that I did not see it coming .
I enjoyed reading this, it would be really nice if you keep building on the characters so they won't be irrelevant later on. Looking forward to more chapters.
the quality of this novel is better than most of the one's i have read. the flow of the story is also good keep it up
Thank you for reading my book. I won't talk too much about it , so I'll let you decide if it's good or not. Feel free to ask me anything here, and I'll do my best to respond. I'm not a very serious person btw, so I tend to inject humor into my responses.