4評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
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寫檢討
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This is a translation... quality? A bit better than google translator, so its bad. 3/10 in grammar. And since this is a translation. The rest dosnt matters. The story is good so far.
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well... lets see how it goes... so long as the 3 debiluke sisters yami mea and mikan are his lovers im good.
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This is a translation... quality? A bit better than google translator, so its bad. 3/10 in grammar. And since this is a translation. The rest dosnt matters. The story is good so far.
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well... lets see how it goes... so long as the 3 debiluke sisters yami mea and mikan are his lovers im good.
because this is from China I want to ask if the other characters are idiots?