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Fire all the way through, love it, simply amazing. Earlier side chapters were funky but they were fine too. Im curious for future events and wondering if MC will make it to the 40k era
Я не фанат Вархаммер но история интересная 140 символов ААААААААААААААААА ААААААААААААААААА ААААААААААААААААА ААААААААААААААААА ААААААААААААААААА ААААААААААААААААА
Pretty good in all departments besides the Stability of the inconsistent updates. Other than that it's pretty good. Do be sure to check it out, it's real good.
This story is ridiculously good (Warhammer baby over here). How good is it? Here’s a list of what happened as I essentially 1-shot read through until the latest chapter. 1. Took me around 4-5 days to read this 2. Cut down sleep time to read this masterpiece 3. Missed a due assignment that was worth 20% of my grade 4. Have to rush to study for an upcoming quiz in less than 5 hours Read this people, this book hits harder than the Horus Heresy.
First of all, simply AMAZING I loved every second of this I found that the develment from at weak boy to a tough resistance fighter to a Space marine fighting demons was incredible, but further into the story you hit these small translation errors which can be easily ignored but they are still there.But thanks again for this amazing story of our boy Hades, and i hope we see him again.
It's a really good story. I love the MC. it has a lot of potential. please give this a read you won't regret it.
me quede en el cap 380 por ahi, y es bastante bueno. aunque hay una cosa que me pica un poco , pero ya me acostumbre :v
I just realized that I haven't add review yet. So here it is.The story was well translated, well pace, good character development and world building was superb cuz it's Warhammer universe that is in itself is enough for 5 star.I recommend just read it. FOR THE EMPEROR
This is a great 40k story, one of the best I've ever seen, so please continue the story.
this story is really good and interesting so please continue your story because I'm a big fan of warhammer 👍👍👍👍😭😭😭😭😭🙏🙏🙏❤️❤️❤️
Well personally i haven't played any Warhammer game or seen anything related to it but how the Author showcases its world through their writing astonishes me. That aside the grammer is extremely good ive seen no mistakes so far while the way the story flows is amazing however at times i do get a little confused as to whats happpening but that may just bee due to my lacking knowledge of the actual Warhammer world other then that i think its an amazing story, definitely worth the read keep up the good work Author.
Amazing I’ve read a few 40k fanfics. Only 1 was as good as this on fanfiction.net but that was about a warp god. As for astartes this tops it. Please don’t drop
it's a very interesting story, one which I recommend to Warhammer 40k fans or those who are interested in the topic.
the translation is weird there is really no bad grammar but like someone said it feels like a first draft. The pov changes continuously with no warning the dialogue is weird I have trouble knowing when one person finishes talking and someone's else starts and at the end of chapters there is no separation between the authors note and the rest. its not bad just a lot of little things making it a pain to read sometimes. the story is good
Nice to see a good Warhammer fanfic I'm interested how the jump to 40k will be managed after the heresy if the fic goes that far, could do a lion of the rock. Or a pop through the warp.
best Warhammer fanfic I have seen. .................................................................................................................
This story isnt like other chinese or russians foanficrion that they play pokemon with women,its great for new people that dont understand warhammer 40k.
It’s great, well done author, it’s a good story so far and it’s enjoyable to read.
It is a really good story so far I have read 25 chapters, the main carácter adapts very fast with both his surrounding and his powers but at the same time overcomes multiple hurdles both mental and physical
i dont know if i have review it yet but here. it's the best warhammer fic ive seen yet
Fire all the way through, love it, simply amazing. Earlier side chapters were funky but they were fine too. Im curious for future events and wondering if MC will make it to the 40k era
Я не фанат Вархаммер но история интересная 140 символов ААААААААААААААААА ААААААААААААААААА ААААААААААААААААА ААААААААААААААААА ААААААААААААААААА ААААААААААААААААА
Pretty good in all departments besides the Stability of the inconsistent updates. Other than that it's pretty good. Do be sure to check it out, it's real good.
This story is ridiculously good (Warhammer baby over here). How good is it? Here’s a list of what happened as I essentially 1-shot read through until the latest chapter. 1. Took me around 4-5 days to read this 2. Cut down sleep time to read this masterpiece 3. Missed a due assignment that was worth 20% of my grade 4. Have to rush to study for an upcoming quiz in less than 5 hours Read this people, this book hits harder than the Horus Heresy.
First of all, simply AMAZING I loved every second of this I found that the develment from at weak boy to a tough resistance fighter to a Space marine fighting demons was incredible, but further into the story you hit these small translation errors which can be easily ignored but they are still there.But thanks again for this amazing story of our boy Hades, and i hope we see him again.
It's a really good story. I love the MC. it has a lot of potential. please give this a read you won't regret it.
me quede en el cap 380 por ahi, y es bastante bueno. aunque hay una cosa que me pica un poco , pero ya me acostumbre :v
I just realized that I haven't add review yet. So here it is.The story was well translated, well pace, good character development and world building was superb cuz it's Warhammer universe that is in itself is enough for 5 star.I recommend just read it. FOR THE EMPEROR
This is a great 40k story, one of the best I've ever seen, so please continue the story.
this story is really good and interesting so please continue your story because I'm a big fan of warhammer 👍👍👍👍😭😭😭😭😭🙏🙏🙏❤️❤️❤️
Well personally i haven't played any Warhammer game or seen anything related to it but how the Author showcases its world through their writing astonishes me. That aside the grammer is extremely good ive seen no mistakes so far while the way the story flows is amazing however at times i do get a little confused as to whats happpening but that may just bee due to my lacking knowledge of the actual Warhammer world other then that i think its an amazing story, definitely worth the read keep up the good work Author.
Amazing I’ve read a few 40k fanfics. Only 1 was as good as this on fanfiction.net but that was about a warp god. As for astartes this tops it. Please don’t drop
it's a very interesting story, one which I recommend to Warhammer 40k fans or those who are interested in the topic.
the translation is weird there is really no bad grammar but like someone said it feels like a first draft. The pov changes continuously with no warning the dialogue is weird I have trouble knowing when one person finishes talking and someone's else starts and at the end of chapters there is no separation between the authors note and the rest. its not bad just a lot of little things making it a pain to read sometimes. the story is good
Nice to see a good Warhammer fanfic I'm interested how the jump to 40k will be managed after the heresy if the fic goes that far, could do a lion of the rock. Or a pop through the warp.
best Warhammer fanfic I have seen. .................................................................................................................
This story isnt like other chinese or russians foanficrion that they play pokemon with women,its great for new people that dont understand warhammer 40k.
It’s great, well done author, it’s a good story so far and it’s enjoyable to read.
It is a really good story so far I have read 25 chapters, the main carácter adapts very fast with both his surrounding and his powers but at the same time overcomes multiple hurdles both mental and physical
i dont know if i have review it yet but here. it's the best warhammer fic ive seen yet