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Madara starts by getting transported into Jujutsu Kaisen Gojo Satoru was still a teenager and Suguru Geto had yet to become rogue. As an ordinary person, he awakened the Template System and extracted the Uchiha Madara Template. Fire Style Ninjutsu, Taijutsu, All Tailed Beasts, Wood Style Ninjutsu, The Eternal Mangekyou Sharingan, Susano, and even The Rinnegan... Tasked by the system to eliminate all Cursed Spirits in the world, Madara decided to cast the Infinite Tsukoyomi. Geto: How can those eyes control Cursed Spirits? Do you know the Curse Manipulation Cursed Technique?! Riko: Madara, please give me the ability to change my destiny! Toji : Why can't my Inverted Spear of Heaven pierce your Innate Technique? What type of Jujutsu is the Susano? Kenjaku: Even the Prison Realm can't seal you, what kind of existence are you!? Ryōmen Sukuna: You're more of a Curse than me! Gojo Satoru: I'm not the 'strongest' yet. ... Above the Divine Tree, the Full Moon in the sky lit up the surroundings. Madara in his 'Sage of Six Paths Mode' had his arms folded as his Rinnegan looked down at Gojo Satoru Ryomen Sukuna, Kenjaku, and the others... "You all, do you want to dance too?" ---- I was bored and wanted to see if I could make the Summary readable, how was it?
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Madara starts by getting transported into Jujutsu Kaisen Gojo Satoru was still a teenager and Suguru Geto had yet to become rogue. As an ordinary person, he awakened the Template System and extracted the Uchiha Madara Template. Fire Style Ninjutsu, Taijutsu, All Tailed Beasts, Wood Style Ninjutsu, The Eternal Mangekyou Sharingan, Susano, and even The Rinnegan... Tasked by the system to eliminate all Cursed Spirits in the world, Madara decided to cast the Infinite Tsukoyomi. Geto: How can those eyes control Cursed Spirits? Do you know the Curse Manipulation Cursed Technique?! Riko: Madara, please give me the ability to change my destiny! Toji : Why can't my Inverted Spear of Heaven pierce your Innate Technique? What type of Jujutsu is the Susano? Kenjaku: Even the Prison Realm can't seal you, what kind of existence are you!? Ryōmen Sukuna: You're more of a Curse than me! Gojo Satoru: I'm not the 'strongest' yet. ... Above the Divine Tree, the Full Moon in the sky lit up the surroundings. Madara in his 'Sage of Six Paths Mode' had his arms folded as his Rinnegan looked down at Gojo Satoru Ryomen Sukuna, Kenjaku, and the others... "You all, do you want to dance too?" ---- I was bored and wanted to see if I could make the Summary readable, how was it?
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