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This is just Gamer System garbage yeah not interested this fic is not going to be anything interesting otherto read for anyone outside of those with nothing else to read atm waiting on updates for actually good fics the powers and the way things work shown so far are just poor quality and not thought out considering the MC a Red Dragon not a humanoid is using knoves as his weapon.... not to kention the trash mish mash if iverused tropes thrown in between the DF the Sharingan and the Kamehameha mah DO NOT READ UNLESS YOU ENJOY BRAINDEAD OPMC OR ARE BORED WAITING FOR AN ACTUAL FANFIC TO UPDATE THIS IS A CARBON COPY POWER GRAB GACHA FIC
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What to expect from the rewrite: I have a lot of new things I want to implement, I want to add some things I created and fix the rapid increase in strength, as well as a bigger background about his reincarnation. The trip to the first world will be in the third volume, I plan to continue with this novel so I will work on it. I delete the previous reviews since it is a new name I eliminated both the good and the bad.
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This is just Gamer System garbage yeah not interested this fic is not going to be anything interesting otherto read for anyone outside of those with nothing else to read atm waiting on updates for actually good fics the powers and the way things work shown so far are just poor quality and not thought out considering the MC a Red Dragon not a humanoid is using knoves as his weapon.... not to kention the trash mish mash if iverused tropes thrown in between the DF the Sharingan and the Kamehameha mah DO NOT READ UNLESS YOU ENJOY BRAINDEAD OPMC OR ARE BORED WAITING FOR AN ACTUAL FANFIC TO UPDATE THIS IS A CARBON COPY POWER GRAB GACHA FIC
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What to expect from the rewrite: I have a lot of new things I want to implement, I want to add some things I created and fix the rapid increase in strength, as well as a bigger background about his reincarnation. The trip to the first world will be in the third volume, I plan to continue with this novel so I will work on it. I delete the previous reviews since it is a new name I eliminated both the good and the bad.
Dragonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn.............................................. ........................................................................................................................................