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Shameless author review Please vote with power stones or leave a review on the stories you liked
it's good story especially if it keep be short series like this.but, I have suggest. How about make a little change:-like make the story with Saji as main with Sona and her peerages. -Vali chaos bridg's female member, you can change Arthur with Artoria [fate series].-Tobio from slash sog series.-Riser's view point, killing issei in his wedding and slaving Rias and her peerages. For Riser's story can include his sister (ravel) and his own peerages.-etc.
I like it. I’m also learning from it to enhance my lemon writing skills. However, while this may be selfish of me do you think you could make a Pokémon one? Like with Teenage characters of Misty, Iris, May, etc as well as Nurse Joy. I hope you can at least consider making this.
vers good writting with detail when it come to uptating i'm not sure if the autor come with a uptade vers freqently
I'm just speechless....... It's unique that's for sure.......I liked some of the chapters but...I think it's not for me.....But the writing quality was really impressive 👍....But then again, it's not for me.
Shameless author review Please vote with power stones or leave a review on the stories you liked
it's good story especially if it keep be short series like this.but, I have suggest. How about make a little change:-like make the story with Saji as main with Sona and her peerages. -Vali chaos bridg's female member, you can change Arthur with Artoria [fate series].-Tobio from slash sog series.-Riser's view point, killing issei in his wedding and slaving Rias and her peerages. For Riser's story can include his sister (ravel) and his own peerages.-etc.
I like it. I’m also learning from it to enhance my lemon writing skills. However, while this may be selfish of me do you think you could make a Pokémon one? Like with Teenage characters of Misty, Iris, May, etc as well as Nurse Joy. I hope you can at least consider making this.
vers good writting with detail when it come to uptating i'm not sure if the autor come with a uptade vers freqently
I'm just speechless....... It's unique that's for sure.......I liked some of the chapters but...I think it's not for me.....But the writing quality was really impressive 👍....But then again, it's not for me.