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Insert_Here

please add ais and tiona to the harem they are the best girls

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Matheus_Pascheto

He was supposed to be emotionless but ar every chatear he displays 1 emotion at every paragraph

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Winter_Whisperer

The writing does not grasp my attention at all. There aren't too noticeable grammar mistakes, considering it is written by A.I. I don't mind the MC too much but the story development is a little too slow for my liking. All in all the story feels bland but it is held up by the promise of a good premise. Good luck moving forward. 👍

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AspiringPedo

The author probably got help from chatgpt to make this but he definitly did a good job of making it readable. Even though technically chatgpt stories are “readable” it’s just too awkward and unrealistic stuff and also the unnecessary descriptions too. But the author actually seemed to do some revisions then just straight copy and paste from gpt so that got in my good books indeed.

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zxerxys

seems good just keep uploading consistently and it will all be good

I'm really enjoying it, Demeter is too beautiful to be left out. [img=recomendo][img=recomendo][img=recomendo][img=recomendo][img=recomendo]

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Sleeping_Owl_00

The story is good but still has its share of flaws. First in my opinion I felt that the protagonist is too gary stu, Second all the chapters always ends in a poetic manner. Its fine for one or two chapters but every chapter ends in the artistic manner which renders the charm of these types of endings ineffective.

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Lizrock

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Son pocos capítulos pero me gusto la novela, sigue subiendo capítulos no los dejes caer 👍👍👍……………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………….

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Lizrock

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RemberMe

first rewiew this novel is to good dont drop this novel so good best novel i read today added to library and im giveing u a power stone plz never drop this book

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Incarnuz

What was written in 76 chapters I could write in 3. The amount of water (or useless text) in this story is about the same as the Earth, actually probably more since earth is only 71% water and this feels like 95% filler. If you think naruto was bad, then boy are you in for a treat. Its SUPER slice of life, MC is still level 1 @ch76, barely dungeon dives. Only decent thing about it is grammar tbh. Below average tbh.

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Cameron_Roxas

I really enjoyed the story, it may have a few flaws but its still good, the character development is good too -sorry, my english is my third language

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FujiwaraNoMokou

REVIEW SHOULD BE MORE THAN 40 CHARACTERS...

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FujiwaraNoMokou

REVIEW SHOULD BE MORE THAN 40 CHARACTERS...

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Z_Ril

Just finished reading chapter 2 and I couldn't wait any longer. THIS IS A MASTERPIECE. the Grammar, the storytelling, it's just... muah. If you're reading this and still not sure if you should read this... then just try reading chapter 1.

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DRberos

thank you for this story I love it a lot

LV 4

md_rizvi

So far, I really Like this video👍 Keep up the GD work🔥

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guarek03

Great story so far, I can't wait to read more.........................................................................................................