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Midnight_Wonder Great Fanfic Keep up the great job You can do this Marvel fanfic directly after Marvel: The Gene Collector Marvel: Ultimatrix Reborn into the Marvel universe is not what Jack Crosby had in mind. Fortunately he was given a gift the power of the Ultimatrix from Ben 10. He decides becoming a superhero is boring and being a villain sounds thrilling. He will use technology and create or modify serums to make him and his women stronger. Harem Melissa Schemmenti Kristin Marie Monica Rappacini Rosalie Octavius Emily Osborn Felicia Hardy Lydia Hardy Venessa Fisk Calypso Medusalith Amaquelin Crystalia Amaquelin Deathbird Lilandra Neramani Emma Frost Selene Gallio Titania Diamondback ( Marvel) Ophelia Sarkissian Susan Storm Ororo Munroe Lucia von Bardas Doris Toomes Gwen Stacy Pepper Potts Helen Cho Maya Hansen Melina Vostokoff Natasha Romanoff Liz Allan Aunt May (MCU) She-Hulk
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The answer to the question on what would happen if you were to tie up Sebastian Shaw and then throw him an aquarium is that he would drown because he doesn’t have to power to adapt/evolve based on circumstances he can only absorb energy, store it, and then redirect that energy.
Very nice concept i hope you finish this or give us at least 300 chapters cause it's about the journey not the destination
I'm looking forward to when the MC copies Apocalypse's abilities, he is the strongest pure mutant in the MCU, and by pure means the one who exclusively uses mutant power, Jean has the Phoenix strength which is a cosmic power not a mutant power and This version of Apocalypse doesn't use technology so he is someone who only uses power derived from the X-gene
the pacing is to fast causing a lot of relationship development that is needed fell to short causing relationship between different people felt hollow and weak each chapter is also very short. It kinda felt like an outline of the story and needs some meat to make it a great fic. It's a good story maybe even an okayish could've been better though
I have been reading this fanfic when it was first released with its title that made me curious. Honestly I like it very much. Please continue writing it and also release long chapters. Hey author please use your imagination at your best to make it more interesting than ever.
this is history has potential , continue author !!!!! [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=coins][img=coins][img=recommend]
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This story is a great story however they blitz right through it giving him many powers with a good handle over the powers even though they're new but the worst part is the Grammer it starts out fine but is slowly falling apart more and more as you read till its more annoying to read then satisfying sadly
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I like to read fanfics and not many of them do an earlier time for marvel, yeah there will be bits and pieces but to make it like this make me happy.
Cool concept... Reminds me of Unscientific Asgardian blah blah, can't remember the rest... Got a lot of potential,I recommend author read that to gain pointers
Just by reading the synopsis, I think it will be an entertaining story that will make it impossible for you not to read it. I hope the story doesn't fall apart and that it is on the good way. good luck
OMG amazing can't wait to see what you have in-store next! I'm also looking forward to reading about dooms most likely epic beating. May your writing continue to be amazing and may writers block never bother you.
Midnight_Wonder Great Fanfic Keep up the great job You can do this Marvel fanfic directly after Marvel: The Gene Collector Marvel: Ultimatrix Reborn into the Marvel universe is not what Jack Crosby had in mind. Fortunately he was given a gift the power of the Ultimatrix from Ben 10. He decides becoming a superhero is boring and being a villain sounds thrilling. He will use technology and create or modify serums to make him and his women stronger. Harem Melissa Schemmenti Kristin Marie Monica Rappacini Rosalie Octavius Emily Osborn Felicia Hardy Lydia Hardy Venessa Fisk Calypso Medusalith Amaquelin Crystalia Amaquelin Deathbird Lilandra Neramani Emma Frost Selene Gallio Titania Diamondback ( Marvel) Ophelia Sarkissian Susan Storm Ororo Munroe Lucia von Bardas Doris Toomes Gwen Stacy Pepper Potts Helen Cho Maya Hansen Melina Vostokoff Natasha Romanoff Liz Allan Aunt May (MCU) She-Hulk
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The answer to the question on what would happen if you were to tie up Sebastian Shaw and then throw him an aquarium is that he would drown because he doesn’t have to power to adapt/evolve based on circumstances he can only absorb energy, store it, and then redirect that energy.
Very nice concept i hope you finish this or give us at least 300 chapters cause it's about the journey not the destination
I'm looking forward to when the MC copies Apocalypse's abilities, he is the strongest pure mutant in the MCU, and by pure means the one who exclusively uses mutant power, Jean has the Phoenix strength which is a cosmic power not a mutant power and This version of Apocalypse doesn't use technology so he is someone who only uses power derived from the X-gene
the pacing is to fast causing a lot of relationship development that is needed fell to short causing relationship between different people felt hollow and weak each chapter is also very short. It kinda felt like an outline of the story and needs some meat to make it a great fic. It's a good story maybe even an okayish could've been better though
I have been reading this fanfic when it was first released with its title that made me curious. Honestly I like it very much. Please continue writing it and also release long chapters. Hey author please use your imagination at your best to make it more interesting than ever.
this is history has potential , continue author !!!!! [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=coins][img=coins][img=recommend]
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This story is a great story however they blitz right through it giving him many powers with a good handle over the powers even though they're new but the worst part is the Grammer it starts out fine but is slowly falling apart more and more as you read till its more annoying to read then satisfying sadly
Writing Quality Updating Stability Story Development Character Design world background Overall Rate Writing Quality Updating Stability Story Development Character Design world background Overall Rate Waiting for more chapter for a serious review
I like to read fanfics and not many of them do an earlier time for marvel, yeah there will be bits and pieces but to make it like this make me happy.
Cool concept... Reminds me of Unscientific Asgardian blah blah, can't remember the rest... Got a lot of potential,I recommend author read that to gain pointers
Just by reading the synopsis, I think it will be an entertaining story that will make it impossible for you not to read it. I hope the story doesn't fall apart and that it is on the good way. good luck
OMG amazing can't wait to see what you have in-store next! I'm also looking forward to reading about dooms most likely epic beating. May your writing continue to be amazing and may writers block never bother you.