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This is pretty much Re: Zero: Why Me but from what i see from the comments you are gonna continue it unlike the original author and i would like to see the story continue because it is a great fanfic of Re: Zero and try your best please.
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this is just a copy of “why me” by “writer with bad grammar” with the only change being he has a second sword
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well, it's a good novel, basically the mc is transported to the world re zero as male arthur Pedragon, he has both excalibus, he has very high status, but the author tries to convey the same vibe as subaru, a more human character so to speak , basically the mc is a subaru 2.0 the difference is that he is stronger and smarter than subaru, he just doesn't know how to use his stolen skills, and he is quite fearful, but in itself it is a good novel. and yes the mc knows both fate and re zero, and has knowledge about the plot.
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The changes are so far relatively few, chapter 1 still has Aaron instead of Alex and I hope it's on the right track as long as it's not just a poorly edited copy and paste of the "Why Me" fic I'm waiting to see the changes next chapters
don't tell me that you're gonna copy it to every nook and cranny or are gonna change something to it other than the extra sword ??
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apart from the addition of a second sword, this fic is a copy of another famous ReZero fic called Why Me by Writer with Bad grammar. he even copied the part about the snack being 2.5 Singaporean dollars. just read the original fanfic
once again amazing work I love it its a [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=fp][img=coins][img=exp][img=coins]great work [img=update][img=update]
Its a great book you should definitely give it try [img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=coins][img=coins][img=exp][img=exp]
I love it great work author sama ❤️❤️❤️❤️😜😜😜😜💯💯💯💯💯🍓🍓🍓🍕🍕🍕🎂🎂🎂🎂🎉🎉👌👌👌🙏🙏🙏❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏☕☕☕☕🍻🍻🍻🍕🍕
Bro uma Copiague descarada......................................................................................... go to wy me in fanfiction.net .......
This is pretty much Re: Zero: Why Me but from what i see from the comments you are gonna continue it unlike the original author and i would like to see the story continue because it is a great fanfic of Re: Zero and try your best please.
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this is just a copy of “why me” by “writer with bad grammar” with the only change being he has a second sword
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well, it's a good novel, basically the mc is transported to the world re zero as male arthur Pedragon, he has both excalibus, he has very high status, but the author tries to convey the same vibe as subaru, a more human character so to speak , basically the mc is a subaru 2.0 the difference is that he is stronger and smarter than subaru, he just doesn't know how to use his stolen skills, and he is quite fearful, but in itself it is a good novel. and yes the mc knows both fate and re zero, and has knowledge about the plot.
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The changes are so far relatively few, chapter 1 still has Aaron instead of Alex and I hope it's on the right track as long as it's not just a poorly edited copy and paste of the "Why Me" fic I'm waiting to see the changes next chapters
don't tell me that you're gonna copy it to every nook and cranny or are gonna change something to it other than the extra sword ??
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apart from the addition of a second sword, this fic is a copy of another famous ReZero fic called Why Me by Writer with Bad grammar. he even copied the part about the snack being 2.5 Singaporean dollars. just read the original fanfic
once again amazing work I love it its a [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=fp][img=coins][img=exp][img=coins]great work [img=update][img=update]
Its a great book you should definitely give it try [img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=coins][img=coins][img=exp][img=exp]
I love it great work author sama ❤️❤️❤️❤️😜😜😜😜💯💯💯💯💯🍓🍓🍓🍕🍕🍕🎂🎂🎂🎂🎉🎉👌👌👌🙏🙏🙏❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏☕☕☕☕🍻🍻🍻🍕🍕
Bro uma Copiague descarada......................................................................................... go to wy me in fanfiction.net .......