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not bad! but you can put the chapter ontop of the chapter title, so you can just write the entire story in the next box. hope you get success!
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not bad! but you can put the chapter ontop of the chapter title, so you can just write the entire story in the next box. hope you get success!
lovely book I can wait to see the continuation