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Volume two should be out today 5/16/2024!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
So far I have been reading this story until chapter 27 and have not been bored. There's a world building, adventure, comedy, slight politics and 18 scenes. I am enjoying reading it. Good job 👏
I like this one.... The idea is kinda fresh. A lot of non-cliche worlds and tech. Mc is OP (not at the start) and lucky but it feels like it actually belongs to him. @C48 4.8/5
One must imagine Sisyphus happy. Unlike in this fanfiction where he really will be happy.
so far so good it is a good story, if fast paced. it seems so far to be building up to a great story hope that the updates continue. would like to see more of the romance harem stuff.
This is a great Fanfiction I'm on chapter 23 but plan on waiting for more chapters before I start reading this again. I really hope you don't drop this Fanfiction and if you do don't remove all of the chapters.
El inicio es bueno y me gusta como no nos deja con la sensacion de esperar a que el protagonista viaje a otro universo, el crecimiento de poder del prota es bueno tambien, su actitud me agrada tambien, obviamente no es perfecta pero para mi es buena para pasar el rato.
While this story can be good, it completely ignores marvel. Multiverse fan fictions are fine, and this one is written mostly well, however the title and picture both suggest it will at least be centered around marvel and expand to the multiverse. This should really be listed as a stargate-multiverse fic
I encourage readers to read the synopsis and tags before diving into this story. The story and MC aren't meant for everyone and on chapter one I've gotten a few comments that seemed surprised by his name even though it's in the synopsis. Thanks to those that took time out of their day to give a positive review on this story. I appreciate it.
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great stories so far really looking forward to reading the next chapters if you're looking for a recommendation so far it has marvel what looks to maybe have been Star wars and currently is in Stargate
Volume two should be out today 5/16/2024!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
So far I have been reading this story until chapter 27 and have not been bored. There's a world building, adventure, comedy, slight politics and 18 scenes. I am enjoying reading it. Good job 👏
I like this one.... The idea is kinda fresh. A lot of non-cliche worlds and tech. Mc is OP (not at the start) and lucky but it feels like it actually belongs to him. @C48 4.8/5
One must imagine Sisyphus happy. Unlike in this fanfiction where he really will be happy.
so far so good it is a good story, if fast paced. it seems so far to be building up to a great story hope that the updates continue. would like to see more of the romance harem stuff.
This is a great Fanfiction I'm on chapter 23 but plan on waiting for more chapters before I start reading this again. I really hope you don't drop this Fanfiction and if you do don't remove all of the chapters.
El inicio es bueno y me gusta como no nos deja con la sensacion de esperar a que el protagonista viaje a otro universo, el crecimiento de poder del prota es bueno tambien, su actitud me agrada tambien, obviamente no es perfecta pero para mi es buena para pasar el rato.
While this story can be good, it completely ignores marvel. Multiverse fan fictions are fine, and this one is written mostly well, however the title and picture both suggest it will at least be centered around marvel and expand to the multiverse. This should really be listed as a stargate-multiverse fic
I encourage readers to read the synopsis and tags before diving into this story. The story and MC aren't meant for everyone and on chapter one I've gotten a few comments that seemed surprised by his name even though it's in the synopsis. Thanks to those that took time out of their day to give a positive review on this story. I appreciate it.
rjnfjvnefvfkevdfvfnejkve xexexxexexexeexexexexxexee cool jiejicejicdcnfncfnfnvnvnfvnfvnfnvn wow j ndfjvndfnvjdfnvjdfnvjfvfdjvndjvndfnj amazing
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great stories so far really looking forward to reading the next chapters if you're looking for a recommendation so far it has marvel what looks to maybe have been Star wars and currently is in Stargate