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I've read this over the last few days, and I have to say - it is really good. I can't wait to see more (as of chapter 93)
Eh it's good but mc is too op so there isn't really much to write about as shown how fast Ace went from east blue to the grand line, plus the author just used Luffys routes to write this fic ignroing the size of the world, could have wrote tons of bs islands.
The mc takes Nami as his crew so luffy should not survive in the future. Author claims she'll be the only one yet he's also done Alabsta and sky island which is taking luffy adventure as well. So not only stealing arcs from luffy can't even do his own ones, mc might as well have been an oc that joined luffys crew. Plus Mc is way to stupid and acts like a buffoon even tho he's an SI and should still have his original personality but acts like luffy and not even ace and just forgets everything.
I’ve just learned that if I don’t leave a review in 49 seconds I’ll be geh, so I only have so much time left. It’s good just believe me it’s good!!!!
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Need to write a review before the author tells us more of how we have the "Gae- virus". This is genuinely among the best written fics on WN. Its hilarious, there are moments that the reader can really laugh out loud while reading. The dissociation from Canon while keeping the base of peoples personalities similar and this weird ACE-LUFFY mix of an SI is odd yet awesome to read too. I had wanted more developments for and moment s of growth for other members but the past few chapters that has been happening one by one I guess, so I'll be patient. thanks author for bringing this joy in our lives and please keep it up, there a lot more story to cover and a lot of room for you to grow as an author too!
I am really enjoying this fanfic. Only thing that frustates me is the slow updates. I want more.
I choose to review this only cuz the author is as beautiful and handsome as this story!!! Though i like the story but I don't like the author much, cuz I'm jealous of his beauty and handsomeness 😭. Btw the story is good and worth reading. The mc is a bit stupid (acting or not idk) but he's powerful enough to balance his life throughout his journey. Our mc is so powerful that he didn't get to test his full powers yet ig but anyways....I NEED MORE CHAPTERS MF!!!
Very funny i love it and wish for more thanks to the chef for the story and good luck for the rest. xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
This is a book that i picked up with little to no knowledge on One-piece,but even with that i was still able to enjoy it. From the beginning to the end this is a fanfic that has truly left a place i my heart and when it is finished will forever have a place in my library. To the author I wish you the best in both your creative and finical endeavor and what sh to see another work from you . From your beloved reader
Good story but we never got the journey from Paradise to the new world for example meeting Rayleigh & Shakky
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A very good read that makes your day good It's basically a dream for op fans that want a very strong ace with good story dev and characters
honestly its great so far i always wanted ace to be something bigger so by the pace ur going it seems its going to be great so thanks and dont drop it
The story is fine, but the grammar and spelling overall is bad and there are some inconsistencies with characters strength, which can be subjective but, from my pov a lot of characters are scaled up and the MC is scaled down from the information the author gave of the cheats he got from the start.
Love it lots, probably my favourite one piece fiction, the crew has running gags and personality that make the characters feel so genuine, especially when many of the characters of Ace’s crew are one time characters in the anime. The weird situations the pirates find themselves in are probably my favourite part of the story, overall the only reason I didn’t rate it higher is because sometimes there’s improper grammar that really pulls you out of immersion, but there’s not too much.
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Tbh, I haven’t read this fan-fic yet. But based on his previous work, I’m very excited to see you produce more chapters for this novel.
A very nice fanfiction. I read a few chapters. The author has definitely made a nice fanfiction. But I stopped reading, the reason is simple; There is no romance. I'm a fan of heavy romance. But don't think it's bad because I left the story unfinished and make sure you read it. Note: I have looked at the author's other stories and I am reading some of the stories that interest me.
Me read story , me like story , me not gay , my parents love me , Author is my bro , Author is gai , Author parents dont love him anymore, i still love you tho.
I've read this over the last few days, and I have to say - it is really good. I can't wait to see more (as of chapter 93)
Eh it's good but mc is too op so there isn't really much to write about as shown how fast Ace went from east blue to the grand line, plus the author just used Luffys routes to write this fic ignroing the size of the world, could have wrote tons of bs islands.
The mc takes Nami as his crew so luffy should not survive in the future. Author claims she'll be the only one yet he's also done Alabsta and sky island which is taking luffy adventure as well. So not only stealing arcs from luffy can't even do his own ones, mc might as well have been an oc that joined luffys crew. Plus Mc is way to stupid and acts like a buffoon even tho he's an SI and should still have his original personality but acts like luffy and not even ace and just forgets everything.
I’ve just learned that if I don’t leave a review in 49 seconds I’ll be geh, so I only have so much time left. It’s good just believe me it’s good!!!!
Will Ace have a romantic partner with Yamato? That would be cool [img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it]
Need to write a review before the author tells us more of how we have the "Gae- virus". This is genuinely among the best written fics on WN. Its hilarious, there are moments that the reader can really laugh out loud while reading. The dissociation from Canon while keeping the base of peoples personalities similar and this weird ACE-LUFFY mix of an SI is odd yet awesome to read too. I had wanted more developments for and moment s of growth for other members but the past few chapters that has been happening one by one I guess, so I'll be patient. thanks author for bringing this joy in our lives and please keep it up, there a lot more story to cover and a lot of room for you to grow as an author too!
I am really enjoying this fanfic. Only thing that frustates me is the slow updates. I want more.
I choose to review this only cuz the author is as beautiful and handsome as this story!!! Though i like the story but I don't like the author much, cuz I'm jealous of his beauty and handsomeness 😭. Btw the story is good and worth reading. The mc is a bit stupid (acting or not idk) but he's powerful enough to balance his life throughout his journey. Our mc is so powerful that he didn't get to test his full powers yet ig but anyways....I NEED MORE CHAPTERS MF!!!
Very funny i love it and wish for more thanks to the chef for the story and good luck for the rest. xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
This is a book that i picked up with little to no knowledge on One-piece,but even with that i was still able to enjoy it. From the beginning to the end this is a fanfic that has truly left a place i my heart and when it is finished will forever have a place in my library. To the author I wish you the best in both your creative and finical endeavor and what sh to see another work from you . From your beloved reader
Good story but we never got the journey from Paradise to the new world for example meeting Rayleigh & Shakky
Nice👍 Keep more chapter Jcphckgdkgzitagozohdoysgosgodlhxlhxlhdhldhlchcllhxlgxlgzglxglzglxglxglxhlxlhxlhxlhxlhxlhxhlxhxlhlxhlxlhxhlxhlxhlxhlxhlxhlchclhhlchlchlchlclhclhhlchlclhchc
A very good read that makes your day good It's basically a dream for op fans that want a very strong ace with good story dev and characters
honestly its great so far i always wanted ace to be something bigger so by the pace ur going it seems its going to be great so thanks and dont drop it
The story is fine, but the grammar and spelling overall is bad and there are some inconsistencies with characters strength, which can be subjective but, from my pov a lot of characters are scaled up and the MC is scaled down from the information the author gave of the cheats he got from the start.
Love it lots, probably my favourite one piece fiction, the crew has running gags and personality that make the characters feel so genuine, especially when many of the characters of Ace’s crew are one time characters in the anime. The weird situations the pirates find themselves in are probably my favourite part of the story, overall the only reason I didn’t rate it higher is because sometimes there’s improper grammar that really pulls you out of immersion, but there’s not too much.
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Tbh, I haven’t read this fan-fic yet. But based on his previous work, I’m very excited to see you produce more chapters for this novel.
A very nice fanfiction. I read a few chapters. The author has definitely made a nice fanfiction. But I stopped reading, the reason is simple; There is no romance. I'm a fan of heavy romance. But don't think it's bad because I left the story unfinished and make sure you read it. Note: I have looked at the author's other stories and I am reading some of the stories that interest me.
Me read story , me like story , me not gay , my parents love me , Author is my bro , Author is gai , Author parents dont love him anymore, i still love you tho.