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I like this fanfiction so much. You have made so many good ideas and this is just great, can't wait till the next chapter is out. 😊👍 You are doing great.
Loved the story. Wish there were more chapters. Though I personally would have loved the mc to be a bit colder yet fun like Dante.
Listen i used to love ghost rider i thought he deserves to be in more shows and movies instead of appearing one or two times so im gonna start reading and sending my power stones to ya and read this book in hopes i can be able to remember the time he killed a wind demon!.
The story is really good, you just need to improve the accuracy of the plots and do not bother with negative reviews since most of them are about the first chapters without going deeper into the story in general, I advise you to continue and improve.👍❤️❤️
Just supporting a great FF about Ghost Rider. You will not be disappointed reading this, such a good read!
I mean i like the book but rhyming everysentences is a bit annoying.......................................,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,...,
Привет автор, я честный любитель чтения разнообразных и интересных фанфиков. Я из Украины из города Херсон, уехал в Одессу из за боевых действий. Я очень очень редко пишу отзывы, так или иначе твое произведение действительно очень хорошо. Как и любой человек мужского пола я +- хотел бы в фанфики немного 18+ или хотя бы романтики, но так как твое произведение действительно очень хорошо (хотя и хотелось бы побольше взаимодействия с другими персонажами, но так как герой истории призрачный гонщик то тут как бы сомнительно) ты действительно хороший автор!!! Из челой кучи дерьма честно еле откопал этот рубин) PS я люблю рубины больше чем алмазы и серебро мне дороже золота. Удачи, пусть в твоей жизни будет все тип топ и больше радости!!!
The story had potential but failed to reach it. The Potterverse was hands down just terrible. illogical, boring, and so little creativity used. just another failure that'll be forgotten after the author stops updating for a week.
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What a disappointment to know that this work is a gay fanfiction. There is no way to read the rest of the story knowing this detail, the author or translator of the work should at least put a gay #TAG in the synopsis.
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Good book. There is few problems, such as: Repeating of phrases like the MC feeling determined back to back. Feel a bit like a word count padding. I don’t mind phrases repeating, because it can add intensity to the scene, but when you do it like 5 times I can’t help but question. The repetitive phrases reminded me of chatgpt, where it put extra padding emotional phrases when not needed. That is pretty much all, there may be more but I am not one such person to notice it when immersed in a good book. Just this one, as it kinda break immersion, so I can’t help but remember. As for if there is a boring part in the story? Regrettably, one time. Gladly that it didn’t last very long or else I would have drop it with my dopamine crazed attention span. -spoiler- When the MC turn into the mad eye and got into hog warts. At the time I was confused why he even need to sneak into hogwart with mad eye identity. For a moment there, I thought the author would make the MC follow the plot line, which he kinda did a bit. I don’t really want to read something which is a repetition of other story without any changes, like many fanfic out there where they let the MC just go along with the story where his influence do little to the story and cause no butterfly effect. Anyway the story got back in track, got right to the action, a reminiscent of video shorts. Dopamine crazed right to the action, no nonsense where something minor is foreshadow and you have to wait 50 chapters to get there. Here, when it promised results, it gets results. No nonsense filler before the fight that matter starts, when the MC wants, he gets. In shorts, I like the writing style. I know I wasn’t fully able to explain all of it. If I can, I can already be an author. Anyway, go read for yourself. It’s better than going to YouTube or other social media, where brain rot is the theme these days. I rather get brain rot from story such as these than the shorts.
This is by far the G.O.A.T. in Ghost Rider FanFics. MC'a Main World is Marvel but he can travel to other Worlds to complete missions and gain resources, and even if he fails, he wouldn't be punished severely. It's a great read. However, the only problem would be that sometimes(few actually) there are dialogues that seem to be taken from Chinese Cultivation stuff, and while it doesn't really affect the story that much, some readers might find it unappealing sometimes. Overall, I hope the Author does not drop this. Imma be throwing stones all day everyday.
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I had high expectations from this since the premise was interesting and saw many good reviews but it came out very dissappointing in hp arc. It seemed like a copy paste from movies once he arrived at hogwarts. And also author didnt research moody properly. He seemed outbof character in many interactions. And also too many plotholes.
This is a pretty good Ghost Rider story in my opinion, the only drawback in this story is that the complexity of the system is not really explained here and the Marvel world where the MC is located is not very detailed and an example is after fighting a villain and suddenly the system wants to send him to another world, and the author did not explain the aftermath of the battle. Yeah, that's the downside in my opinion, please make the story a bit more complex and don't forget the aftermath. Thank You!
This just sucks. Potterverse lasted longer than it needed to and once the MC got back to his home world, it just all went downhill. The plot focuses on everything except the MC. And the MC keeps getting nerfed. Ghost Rider is Universe Level, but is having trouble with basic level enemies.
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It is a good story. I hope it continues, I like that the MC had a foundation in the world before he got his power, but I don't understand why he is so wary of Phill. Yes, he is an S.H.I.LE.D. agent and everything but he is a good guy and might help him protect his family better, and I like his teaming with Punchier.
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I really like the concept and the quality of the story so far. I have high hopes for this story .
This is good, though It wouldn't hurt for the mc to have a normal IQ. In his second life and his intelligence is a bit worrying.💔 I like the author's writing style, and the grammar is good too.
Great read, can’t wait to know what other cinematic universes he’ll be going to. I actually kinda want him to go to the Blade cinematic universe or Underworld cinematic universe.
One of the best Ghost Rider stories I've read. The author did nerf the MC, but like he has a system, so he'll get more power later. So I give it an 8/10
the book is quite good. one of the few good gr X multiple fictions out there I think .if someone disagrees please comment the name of the fanfic so I can enjoy it too.
I am enjoying the story very much. Ghost rider was always one of my favourite comic book character that's why seeing him in other universe is very novel idea.I hope the author will continue the Good work
This would be a typical multiverse fanfic, but the multiverse is in movies instead of anime. A very fresh take, with the OP MC usually being able to overcome everything
I like this fanfiction so much. You have made so many good ideas and this is just great, can't wait till the next chapter is out. 😊👍 You are doing great.
Loved the story. Wish there were more chapters. Though I personally would have loved the mc to be a bit colder yet fun like Dante.
Listen i used to love ghost rider i thought he deserves to be in more shows and movies instead of appearing one or two times so im gonna start reading and sending my power stones to ya and read this book in hopes i can be able to remember the time he killed a wind demon!.
The story is really good, you just need to improve the accuracy of the plots and do not bother with negative reviews since most of them are about the first chapters without going deeper into the story in general, I advise you to continue and improve.👍❤️❤️
Just supporting a great FF about Ghost Rider. You will not be disappointed reading this, such a good read!
I mean i like the book but rhyming everysentences is a bit annoying.......................................,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,...,
Привет автор, я честный любитель чтения разнообразных и интересных фанфиков. Я из Украины из города Херсон, уехал в Одессу из за боевых действий. Я очень очень редко пишу отзывы, так или иначе твое произведение действительно очень хорошо. Как и любой человек мужского пола я +- хотел бы в фанфики немного 18+ или хотя бы романтики, но так как твое произведение действительно очень хорошо (хотя и хотелось бы побольше взаимодействия с другими персонажами, но так как герой истории призрачный гонщик то тут как бы сомнительно) ты действительно хороший автор!!! Из челой кучи дерьма честно еле откопал этот рубин) PS я люблю рубины больше чем алмазы и серебро мне дороже золота. Удачи, пусть в твоей жизни будет все тип топ и больше радости!!!
The story had potential but failed to reach it. The Potterverse was hands down just terrible. illogical, boring, and so little creativity used. just another failure that'll be forgotten after the author stops updating for a week.
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What a disappointment to know that this work is a gay fanfiction. There is no way to read the rest of the story knowing this detail, the author or translator of the work should at least put a gay #TAG in the synopsis.
揭示劇透 Good book. There is few problems, such as: Repeating of phrases like the MC feeling determined back to back. Feel a bit like a word count padding. I don’t mind phrases repeating, because it can add intensity to the scene, but when you do it like 5 times I can’t help but question. The repetitive phrases reminded me of chatgpt, where it put extra padding emotional phrases when not needed. That is pretty much all, there may be more but I am not one such person to notice it when immersed in a good book. Just this one, as it kinda break immersion, so I can’t help but remember. As for if there is a boring part in the story? Regrettably, one time. Gladly that it didn’t last very long or else I would have drop it with my dopamine crazed attention span. -spoiler- When the MC turn into the mad eye and got into hog warts. At the time I was confused why he even need to sneak into hogwart with mad eye identity. For a moment there, I thought the author would make the MC follow the plot line, which he kinda did a bit. I don’t really want to read something which is a repetition of other story without any changes, like many fanfic out there where they let the MC just go along with the story where his influence do little to the story and cause no butterfly effect. Anyway the story got back in track, got right to the action, a reminiscent of video shorts. Dopamine crazed right to the action, no nonsense where something minor is foreshadow and you have to wait 50 chapters to get there. Here, when it promised results, it gets results. No nonsense filler before the fight that matter starts, when the MC wants, he gets. In shorts, I like the writing style. I know I wasn’t fully able to explain all of it. If I can, I can already be an author. Anyway, go read for yourself. It’s better than going to YouTube or other social media, where brain rot is the theme these days. I rather get brain rot from story such as these than the shorts.
This is by far the G.O.A.T. in Ghost Rider FanFics. MC'a Main World is Marvel but he can travel to other Worlds to complete missions and gain resources, and even if he fails, he wouldn't be punished severely. It's a great read. However, the only problem would be that sometimes(few actually) there are dialogues that seem to be taken from Chinese Cultivation stuff, and while it doesn't really affect the story that much, some readers might find it unappealing sometimes. Overall, I hope the Author does not drop this. Imma be throwing stones all day everyday.
гавно, автор шлюха, автор лох, автор пидараз! ададададжададвжвжвжажажажвжвжвжвдвдаддвдвдвжвжвжвжвдвщдв ададададжададвжвжвжажажажвжвжвжвдвдаддвдвдвжвжвжвжвдвщдв ададададжададвжвжвжажажажвжвжвжвдвдаддвдвдвжвжвжвжвдвщдв
I had high expectations from this since the premise was interesting and saw many good reviews but it came out very dissappointing in hp arc. It seemed like a copy paste from movies once he arrived at hogwarts. And also author didnt research moody properly. He seemed outbof character in many interactions. And also too many plotholes.
This is a pretty good Ghost Rider story in my opinion, the only drawback in this story is that the complexity of the system is not really explained here and the Marvel world where the MC is located is not very detailed and an example is after fighting a villain and suddenly the system wants to send him to another world, and the author did not explain the aftermath of the battle. Yeah, that's the downside in my opinion, please make the story a bit more complex and don't forget the aftermath. Thank You!
This just sucks. Potterverse lasted longer than it needed to and once the MC got back to his home world, it just all went downhill. The plot focuses on everything except the MC. And the MC keeps getting nerfed. Ghost Rider is Universe Level, but is having trouble with basic level enemies.
揭示劇透 It is a good story. I hope it continues, I like that the MC had a foundation in the world before he got his power, but I don't understand why he is so wary of Phill. Yes, he is an S.H.I.LE.D. agent and everything but he is a good guy and might help him protect his family better, and I like his teaming with Punchier.
揭示劇透 I really like the concept and the quality of the story so far. I have high hopes for this story .
This is good, though It wouldn't hurt for the mc to have a normal IQ. In his second life and his intelligence is a bit worrying.💔 I like the author's writing style, and the grammar is good too.
Great read, can’t wait to know what other cinematic universes he’ll be going to. I actually kinda want him to go to the Blade cinematic universe or Underworld cinematic universe.
One of the best Ghost Rider stories I've read. The author did nerf the MC, but like he has a system, so he'll get more power later. So I give it an 8/10
the book is quite good. one of the few good gr X multiple fictions out there I think .if someone disagrees please comment the name of the fanfic so I can enjoy it too.
I am enjoying the story very much. Ghost rider was always one of my favourite comic book character that's why seeing him in other universe is very novel idea.I hope the author will continue the Good work
This would be a typical multiverse fanfic, but the multiverse is in movies instead of anime. A very fresh take, with the OP MC usually being able to overcome everything