Sailing: The Kingdom Of God I Created Has Been Exposed!

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Drako_0692

The concept was fine but he is the typical slave of the system that moves by and for him. I understand that this concept of a slave is very attached to Chinese culture, but I still can't help but hate it.

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Ponyworld_Z

i really like this fanfiction. it reminds me of the fanfiction with the golden list and rifan that was also a very good fanfiction. i hope that this one won't be abandoned i wanna see how the WG shoots itself in it's own foot XD

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darknightofAnime

love it please don't drop this fanfiction.

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THE_RANGER

good concept, keep it up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Garland

I say that tbis story is average. It had an interesting conceot at first but then things just felt really weird. Its not a kingdom building story or a hidden kingdom finally opening itself to the world but just a random showcase of the strength of the Dragon Kingdom. It would have been fine but what makes it worse is the whole broadcast system thing which just feels all around badly used. The system was just their broadcasting but then it had a voting system and all that. It just feels disconnected overall. Which that it was just either the kingdom building or finally opening to the world kind of story.Tgeir was a similar story with a kingdom building thing but that story was also not used well with just how not random the system was and making the kingdom strong fast without any form of reasonable excuse.

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covestar

Interesting concept, but the story is just filled with useless chatter and unnecessary words more than half the time..

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Mustifa_89

Good novel what is original name in chinese

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Daoist_CloudySky

I am liking this very mych. But please update it a little bit more quickly 🙂

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Geno_hunter

So far, it has been a very interesting story, and thank you so much for updating new chapters 🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳 keep up the awesome job

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Jerome_Esperanza

Some naming errors but awesome really love this fanfic.... Can't wait for the next chapter already one of my favorite fanfics to read [img=update][img=update][img=update]

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urnome

nice one 👍👍 can't wait for more 🎉 wish u all the best

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Gabichu_Yeah

This story really deserves 5 stars, I recommend reading it, building an empire and happiness of the citizens (personally I think that the last is the best of these novels/fanfics)

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DaoistdAPAxL

This story is... Unbelievably... Undeniably...

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Nicole_Arrojado

this novel is great[img=update][img=update]

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Divine_Sovereignty

The moment I saw dragon I knew it was another Chinese authors😂 who are racist asf

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Erick200

Da para passar o tempo................. Da para passar o tempo................. Da para passar o tempo................. Da para passar o tempo.................

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Alfstein_72

really good fanfic, waiting for the next chapter

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Baked_Immortal

A truely great read & a unique change to most fanfics

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Rizki_Caturianto

It's a quite great One Piece fanfiction!! I like it!!! 👍👍 It have a interesting stotyline/plot, but the translation/english is quite bad.. The Chinese name (MC/Guo Yang, MC kingdom/Luo gang, Boss Bai, etc) is make this story confusing, you should translate it better author san.. Ohh the grammar is quite bad too (sometime it say he instead of she for Boss Bai, etc).. I really like this kind of story (kingdom building, then there's a list system to show how the kingdom grow).. It can be a really really great story if you do the translate good author san, I hope you can do better next.. Can't wait to see next chapter author san.. Keep up the good work 😁👍😍😍

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ReaderLove

Haven't read the novel, but just with the synopsis, it looks like the novel is Chinese propaganda, especially how they mention the East Blue Kingdom is the best, has everything and nothing is wrong with the kingdom. Literally something that is always seen in Chinese urban novels, where the plot praises China to death like dogs. For that, the novel already gives a bad impression.