Reincarnated as a step-dad in a fantasy world

LV 15

Alex_7892

Great story so far. I binge read it to the current chapter and so far it's very promising. There are the occasional grammar errors but nothing substantial that will mess up your read. Ultimately it's a smooth read and everything flows quite well. The story so far looks good but I think some people might take issue with the MC who has memories from his prior life and his new life who can at times appear like a dunse. However I can easily see how that's beginning to change. The best part of this novel so far for me has to be the design of the characters and how they interact. The author did a brilliant job on that part. The novel is still at the beginning so not much has been on world background aside from a few things. Overall great novel so far. Highly recommend. I hope you continue with it author and best of luck.

LV 4

Yang_ki

A great novel filled with everything a man of cultures can ask for harem system win cest

LV 4

Sabaroth_zarkiel

Hello author I wanted to know if there is ntr or Yuri in this novel .

LV 4

Dany_K_9260

Writing is good and not many mistakes that make it hard to follow, only long paragraphs and small misspellings. Only thing I’d say is a major negative is how dragged the story is- almost 100 chapters just to get to the meeting talked about at the start which was like less than a week away at that point. Makes the story feel stationary.

LV 15

AatroxVoid

Overall the story is pretty solid. Looking forward to see how the world will expand and how the characters develop. Keep up the good work!

LV 11

SwordDemon876

Story till the end of the 1st volume was quite great. The MC's ability (Smoke) reminds me a character for HunterxHunter and I have not seen this unique implementation of it (even in the case of Mist). Love the so far ❤️. And hope you return back soon 😁.

LV 14

Aayann_

I really like the story . I can say that the story very good the background and characters are also good.

LV 3

Aayann_Gupta

hello author I want mention that your synonym does not match your story, I mean this fantastic novel and i am really hooked to it but iIlike mention, like you mention that Jake take control of the Alex body but it's different like they merge together but Alex is dominant, while reading synonym it feels like Alex is dead and Jake take control of the body, I am really confused sometimes reading the story, but if am not mention the synonym the story is very good. just want to know your views on this. Thanks Author for the Story.

LV 1

Shadow_RLYT

Good story, great smut and how often smut happens compared to non-smut chapters but the main story is progressing what seems like more slowly than other stories although I do enjoy a fair amount more smut than most people I enjoy the amount written a lot and it's more than other books. Writing is great other than a misspelling here and there although I don't really mind no ones perfect. Also very cultured and I would like to see more Lillia action but that's just me.

LV 3

diabolic_diablo

pretty good , diverse personalities of the harem and cute interactions between them. Worth a read.

LV 15

Devon_Pangburn

Outstanding. The main character is not some weak dumb pushover or some naive young boy. i always enjoy when a MC gets going quickly and doesn't take forever to start building their strength. And great spicy chapters too. Worth everyone interested in Taboo relationships and Systems/LitRPG giving it a shot.

LV 2

Yang_Sera

Author, discord link is not working. zzx

LV 3

Daoistyg3oun

Nccccccccccccccc Goods!!!!!!!!! keep it up plsssss

LV 4

radioactive_jig0l0

great story author, it's one of the kind stories which i binge read to 190 chapters, those who love" my three wives are vampires" would love this story

LV 3

DaoisthiEB5M

good story..............................

LV 4

Raoking

this story fun to read and at start maybe he look weak as story developed he become something else . mc is Not a dumb char he is pretty good at what he is doing . world background is unknown little explained. maybe because he is in taboo relationship 😚😏😏. I liked relationship mc maintained. can tell me will he put his hand on all relatives you know 4 generation if yes thankyou 🥳.

LV 4

ShiroNeko280

The mc is op and I really like it 😁 so far so good 😊

LV 5

NewManagement

A very good story. Mc isn’t an idiot. Author has a tendency to prolong scenes but it’s not bad. One of the better stories on webnovel and you will def vote for it once you start reading it. Looking forward to more leveling up of the MC

LV 2

Louafi_Bilal

[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]